I have given
my all,
all you give me
is no.
What more
can I offer?
If you’ll notice
me never?
“Should I give up?”
I once asked.
You just shrugged,
and said… no.
—
03.16.2016
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Beautiful words….. 💕
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Thank you, Vikey!
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I would give up. That doesn’t sound like a healthy relationship.
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it surely isn’t!
Thank you, Mel!
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Beautifully done. This lopsided relationships never work out. One person always giving, the other always taking. You described it so perfectly.
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Oh thank you very much! 😀 Your words are a delight to have! 😀
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Smiling
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😀
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I agree with Melinda, it doesn’t sound like a healthy relationship at all. The narrator deserves better!
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Yeah! Indeed! I am rooting for the narrator too! 😀
Thank you, Jade!
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This relationship doesn’t appear to be very hopeful! Great poem!
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Yes. It’s not a mutual one. Thank youuuu PJ!
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Ugh… What a jerk.
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HAHA! That’s the word. JERK! 😀
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😁😁
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Ops. I forgot to thank you. (where are my manners) Thank you, love! ❤
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No worries. 😊
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What Sarah said! 😛 Great poem, Rosema!
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HAHA! Right!
Thank you, Al!
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😀
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😀
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Hope this is fiction, doesn’t sound good at all–a sure road to Heartbreak.
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yes dear. fiction only. ❤ ❤ ❤
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I thought so–whew!!
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yay! thank youuu!
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Welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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🙂
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The turn at the end is subtle, and I wonder how promising. Is there something about him or the relationship that warrants further patience? Once again, you make us think, sister. Thank you for that!
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I think love warrants patience. But i guess giving me is already at the door steps. 🙂
Thank youuuuuu, brother! 😀
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Yes, doesn’t sound too promising for a future. She will do better without all this.
Have a great weekend!
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I think they really ought to give up – that is not a healthy relationship! A beautiful poem, Rosema. 🙂
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Oh that is so true! Far from healthy! Thank you, dear! 😀
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And yet, some people cannot take no for an answer..Such a clever write 🙂
Blessings to you and a gorgeous weekend!
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Indeed you are right!
Thank you my darling! ❤
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❤ ❤ w3lcome
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Ahhhh! The ending… just twisted the tale altogether.. I was so hoping, it would be easy to just leave and move on.. But the end..again gave the person some hope…
Amazing!!! ❤
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Yeah! He’s a jerk, eh?
Thank youuuuu for catching up, my dear! I will do the same soon!!! I miss your words!
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Surely he is on!
I can’t take the risk of missing your posts 🙂 ❤
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awwww. you are just the sweetest! I am not able to read yours yet. 😦 But I will be there soooon!
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My pleasure, dear 😀 😀 ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Sounds like a jerk. Let him go. Or her. 🙂
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a jerk indeed! Thank you!
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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🙂
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