Always No

june 16

I have given
my all,
all you give me
is no.

What more
can I offer?
If you’ll notice
me never?

“Should I give up?”
I once asked.
You just shrugged,
and said… no.

©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.

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47 thoughts on “Always No”

  1. The turn at the end is subtle, and I wonder how promising. Is there something about him or the relationship that warrants further patience? Once again, you make us think, sister. Thank you for that!

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  2. Ahhhh! The ending… just twisted the tale altogether.. I was so hoping, it would be easy to just leave and move on.. But the end..again gave the person some hope…
    Amazing!!! ❤

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