In editing,
you take some time away from your piece,
then come back with clear eyes for error.
I am not a written piece that you need to edit.
But you take sometime away to refresh your heart.
Like an initial draft, I waited for my editor’s
red-pen-equipped comeback.
I waited,
I waited,
I waited.
You’re back,
then edit me
out.
—
03.11.2016
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash
Great poem/story, very powerful!
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yay! i will never be able to thank you enough, PJ!
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((hugs))
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*hugsss back* i hope you are well, dear!
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Thank you Rosey! I am well and I hope you are too!
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I have busy day ahead but I am okay. 😀 I would love to hear how the popcorn eating birds and the cats are now. 🙂
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I haven’t seen the cats around for awhile except for one. The birds will hardly touch the popcorn now! Hahaha!
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OH!! Why??? Because they think its not flavorful as they want it to be? 😀
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I think it is because there is more food available for them in the summer and they aren’t starving like they are in the winter.
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Ohhhh. That’s why!
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I’m actually feeding the hummingbirds now.
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awwww!! hummingbirds!! they are the cutesst! 😀
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Yes, they are! I enjoy watching them.
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Awww. I wish I can do the same. 🙂
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You don’t have hummingbirds in the Phillipines?
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I am not sure but I haven’t seen one. Maybe in some forests here there are hummingbirds.
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They would be hanging around flowers.
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oh geez. that’s a lovely scene!!
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Yes! A lovely scene!
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awww! i wish i can see one someday! 😀
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Oh no! Edit him out too! Move on to someone better!
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HAHAHAHA! She will turn a blank page into a triumphant revenge, Mel! 😀 😀 😀
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Good for her! that’s the best kind of revenge
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Indeed! Thanks, Mel!
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Well, two can play at that game! She should edit him out, flip the page, and get started on a new chapter 😉
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YEAH!!! She’s writing a new one, now! 😀 thank you, Jade!
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❤️
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yay! thank you, Nashrah!
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Love your blog posts so much 🙂
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oh thank youuu Nashrah! 😀
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Beautiful poem! I can feel the emotion. Well done, friend!
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Thank you dear Kay! 🙂
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Such a clever girl you are, editing and editing people out compared. He takes some time away (as one should when editing) but he decides he doesn’t need her in his story/poem of life and edits her out. So sad, she should make sure to have his words in her life shredded in the paper shredder. 🙂
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aww. thank you very much! 😀 😀 😀 ❤ his words are now shredded as she wrote another page! 😀
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Oooh, I’m all for some triumphant revenge–you go, Girl!! And count me in 🙂
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Yay! Hello there Shadeau! 😀 THank you very much! 😀
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You are always Most Welcome 🙂
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I just want to hug you right NOW! ❤
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Wow wow wow!!… Spellbound!!!!! ❤ ❤ ❤
Guess don't have words to describe it!! Loved it ❤
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awww. thank youuuu! I am loving your loving comments, Sriviiii! 😀 😀 😀
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❤ ❤ ❤
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If the strikethrough works, then we’re left with “You’re back, then”–and who knows how things will go from there? I’m rooting for her! This line is fantastic for life: “I am not a written piece that you need to edit.”
Such fine work, sister!
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Yay! thank you, brother! 😀 😀 😀
We are all rooting for her! And time might come when it’s her turn to edit him out! 😀
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Yes! That would be just!
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Yay! thank you!
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[…] — Rosema from Rosemawrites […]
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Thank you for letting my words shine, Mel!
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