Silence
piercing,
sounds like
screaming.
My eyes’re
staring,
fearfully
pleading.
“Just,
let me go,”
you keep
repeating.
—
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
February 2016
Photo credit: Unsplash
I write because I read. I read because I write.
Silence
piercing,
sounds like
screaming.
My eyes’re
staring,
fearfully
pleading.
“Just,
let me go,”
you keep
repeating.
—
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
February 2016
Photo credit: Unsplash
Silence screams. You’re right, and you express that poignantly. The tension of the plea is created strongly with heartache the reader (this reader) can feel.
I hope your June 2 is off to a good start, Rosema. Ten and a half hours away for me.
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ooooh. thank you for your keen comment, again, Christopher! 🙂
and yes, June 2 has been okay. 😀 i wish you a great day, too! 😀
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Oh wow. 💕
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thank you, Sarah! ❤
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I had to triple check that this was not real, but just fiction, and was relieved to see “fiction” in the tags.
So strong, and powerful.. wow!
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yay! glad i didn’t forgot the ‘fiction’ tag. 😀 yes, this isn’t real. and this is actually written last Feb. 😀
Thanks, darling!
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Great to know princess! 😊
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Oh dear, so deeply sad. Hmm… you keep me wondering…
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thank you dearie!
Wondering… about…???
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Wondering how some people deal with break ups and letting go. Haaay.. *another sigh*
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oh geeeeeeeez… i think each one has their own way of dealing with such…
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I can only imagine… hahaha! #walangforever
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meron! HAHA. depende! 😀
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Beautiful words 🙂
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thank you very much! 😀
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excellent writing..
regards
shreyans
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Hi Shreyans! Thank you very much! It was great e-meeting you! 🙂
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hello…my pleasure..
keep writing..)
regards
shreyans
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I will. thank you! 🙂 And i will be visiting you, soon. 🙂
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one of the best read..!!!
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Hi Vivek! Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate it.
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😦 ouch! Sometimes silence says a lot than a jabbering of words. So much pain in so few words…
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indeed. silence hurts more than loud shouts, eh?
Thank you, NJ! Sorry for making you sad again.
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Excellent but so haunting!
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haunting is my favorite complement, PJ! 😀 Thank you!
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Hi, Fab blog! I have just set up mine, but still in the very early stages – a few months old. Just making efforts to link in with fellow bloggers to improve our followers and get the word out there for us both. I would appreciate you having a peek at my blog, as I have published several posts. Feel free to like, comment, follow or just take a peek. Thank you 🙂
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Hi! Thank you for dropping by! Good luck on your new blog. Will drop by soon! 😉
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Hi, thank you and much appreciated 🙂 x
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you’re welcome! 😀
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aww!
Seducing poetry!
Rosy! u r brilliant! : )
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yay! so as you dear! Thank you! ❤
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oh boy, sounds dangerous! I hope she gets free!
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I hope so too! -_-
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🙂
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Silence can be as deafening as a scream in the dark. Silence leaves you alone with only your thoughts to keep you company. It seems that she may want to escape the silence. Great piece. It captures the heaviness of silence so greatly. Thanks for sharing.
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Oh thank you. I love your creative and poetic lines. Thank you so much! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thanks for your compliment. I love reading and writing poetry. I follow you because of your great poetic voice.
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Oh thank you! 🙂 I will be visiting your lovely poems, soon. 🙂
And.. may I know how would you want me to call you? 🙂
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Estacious is my name.
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thank you, Estacious! 🙂 Will drop by in your blog soon. 🙂
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Break ups are the worst! And I was happy when I saw the tag ‘fiction’ …
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oh yes dear. it hurts. a lot!
Thank you! ❤
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