A Beautiful Mess
(a poem for the man who owns my heart)
i have given you
several no’s,
persistent you
just let love show.
now it’s my turn
to let you know,
i won’t go stern
or even slow,
i don’t regret
that I said yes,
the love you set’s
a beautiful mess.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash
Happy birthday to my dearest.
Thank you for almost six years of a beautiful mess. ❤
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Oh my, Rosey–sighing over this romantic swoon-worthy masterpiece! Congrats to you both–here’s to many, many more lovely years.
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Yay! thank you my dear sister! ❤ I told him you said he looked kind and tender and that made him smile so wide. HAHA. He said i am lucky. Geez. HAHA 😀
Thanks, sister Stella! 😀
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I love him already, can’t wait for him to bring you for a visit…someday ❤
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awww. that would make him smile more! 😀 😀 😀 I could not wait to. especially with that cheesecake of yours in my mind. geeexz. 😀 😀 😀
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Hahahahaha–lots of food!
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😍😍😍
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🙂
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Oh gosh, this is so sweet and romantic. The love is apparent in every verse. Congratulations to six years and here’s to many more, my dear ❤ 🙂
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Awww. thank you very much, Jade! 😀 Thank youuuuu! ❤
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aww what a sweet poem, what a lovely tribute 🙂 I am glad you found your beautiful mess ❤
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Thank youuuu! I am more glad I said yes! 😀
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aw 🙂 you’re welcome. He must be a special guy to have won your heart.
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Beautiful mess, a lovely rush
a riot of colours black and red
As long as you hold the brush
Happy birthday to your dearest
Just a silly girlie impromptu verse for your love J. Give him my Hi, will you?
Lots of love and happiness to you both.
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oh wow! oh wow!!!! That is so lovely impromptu, my dear Nandita!!! 😀 😀 😀 Thank youuu!
I am sure he will go *kilig* with that one! 😀
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Hi Nandita, thank you so much for your lovely verses. 🙂 It made me smile while reading the verse you made for me. 🙂
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Oh, this is so sweet! A poem for the man that owns your heart. *sigh* Gosh, you both have been together six years! That is wonderful!
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HAHAHA! Thank you very very much, PJ! 😀 😀 😀
Yeah.. been in love for six long years, though our anniversary, our 6th, is on December. 😀
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That is just awesome!
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Yay. Thank youuu
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aww how romantic : )
lovely mess
sweet love
romantic verses
and special occasion
Happy Birthday to him
: )
and my hello
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yaaaay! thank you, Jyotee! That’s a lovely lovely comment! 😀
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Happy birthday to your honey!! What generous and beautiful gift this poem for him.
love, Dajena ❤
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thank you for the greeting and lovely words, darling Dajena! 😀
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Cute and Romantic. A lovely piece for your guy on his bday!
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yay! thank you! I do hope he will like it! 😀
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Oh I’m sure he will 😀❤️
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He did. 😉
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Awesome!
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❤
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Happy happy birthday to your dear guy 🙂 Although I’m a day late. Sorry about that.
Six years of happiness
six years of togetherness
may it continue to grow
till you grow old and more…
Okay, just some lame attempt to add more mush 😀 ❤ Tell him I said hi and that I'm a huge fan of his girl 🙂
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Oh wow! What a lovely lovely lovely comment! and that last line just made me blush! Thank you dear NJ! 😀 😀 😀
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“A Beautiful Mess.” Sounds like life at its best. I’m glad that taking turns is a part of it all. My best to you both!
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Thank you very much for the rhyming comment! 😀
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