Come Out

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fib

Come Out: A Fib*

Set
your
spirit
free from doubt,
let your heart speak up,
fifty shades of freedom, come out.

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In response to May Book Prompts –  by Sarah Doughty and MahWrites.

Today’s prompt is Fifty Shades of Freedom.

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Fib

Fib or fibonacci poem is based on the Fibonacci sequence. The number of syllables in each line of the poem is the sum of the previous two lines: 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8.

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38 thoughts on “Come Out”

  5. Great job again. This picture reminds me of my bedroom way back in the 80s when I was a teenager. I had this poster with a similar picture and the caption: “even in darkness light dawns for those who believe.”

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  6. Fifty shades of freedom, come out 🙂 Oh Rose, I can never stop enjoying your wonderful writings 🙂 I am so glad to catch up on them ❤

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  8. Amazing 🙂 ❤
    I recently finished reading the fifty shades series (I know the book released ages ago but its better late than never :D) and this poem is as if Ana is asking Christian to come out of the darkness he is surrounded with.
    Love the Fib 😀 ❤

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    1. Geeez! You are forgiven. I haven’t literally finished the series. (I read half of the first book because I can’t understand some terms. And then I read the plot of the entire book 1 and book 2 and then I read the whole book 3. Cheating, eh?)
      BUT I would agree!!! Christian is also on my mind as I wrote this poem!!! HAHAHA

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      1. 🙂 oh yeah.. can totally understand… While reading this book esp the first part half of the time I was surfing through the net to understand things… It’s quite educational 😉 But ya second and third were easier after that … Though I found the third part to be quite predictable sorts… Liked the fourth part …the version of Christian 😀

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      1. Ya..True 🙂
        Ummm…you can skip it….I liked it just because it was from Christian’s perspective and not Ana’s (was bored of her perspective for 3 parts of the series) 😉

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