Woman’s Worth: A Cinq Trois Deca La Rhyme*
Your staring wide grinning eyes consume the beauty I behold.
From my face to my toes you gaze as if I’m a shining gold.
Words will be futile, ‘cause your malicious gape speak for itself.
Dark dreamy, steamy scenes your mind creates, I can see myself.
Stop! For your soul’s sake put your vicious visions in state of dearth.
I have wise mind and kind heart, they are my assets since my birth.
I am more than flawless face and bare body that’re rare on earth,
I am more than the lustful illusions you can never hold,
I am more than the photo-shopped babe in your men’s cave bookshelf,
I’m more than what you can see and feel. No words can speak my worth.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
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In response to Napowrimo Day 27. (yes, I’m catching up! :D)
Today’s prompt comes to us from Megan Pattie, who points us to the work of the Irish poet Ciaran Carson, who increasingly writes using very long lines. Carson has stated that his lines are (partly) based on the seventeen syllables of the haiku, and that he strives to achieve the clarity of the haiku in each line. So today, Megan and I collectively challenge you to write a poem with very long lines.
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Cinq Trois Deca La Rhyme is an invented form found at Shadow Poetry, created by Laura Lamarca. The Cinq Trois Deca La Rhyme is:
- a decastich, a poem in 10 lines.
- syllabic, 15 syllables per line.
- rhymed, rhyme scheme aabbcccabc.
Your final line is a magnificent summation–so true.
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Thank you very much for reading this long poem. 🙂 This form isn’t my comfort zone and comments like yours make it worth writing this piece. 🙂 Thank you!
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You’re very talented–and fearless about trying new, difficult forms. I salute you!!
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Yay! Thank you very very much! I am discovering them and I am glad and grateful for the support I am getting. 🙂
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More “yays” 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Love this! “No words can speak my worth” And yet your poem does exactly that. Brilliant 😊
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Thank you very much, Kay! I am now discovering my feminist side. 😀 😀 😀
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I am more. Yes, you are. Women are. Ideally, I’d like to think that people are. Direct message, framed and woven through meter and through rhyme. I believe! Well-wrought, Rosema!
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I would agree, Christopher. People are more than what we know, what we think, what we see and feel. 🙂
Thank you again! 😀
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Strong and independent. Lovely, Rosema! 💕
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We all are strong and independent, Annie. ❤ Salamat! 🙂
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#GirlPower YAY! Fierce and beautifully penned, Rosema!
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YEAHHH! Para sa ekonomiya! HAHA
Kidding aside, we are really worth more than we think my dear. 🙂 ❤
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Itaas ang bandera ng kababaihan! Haha. Really though, this is so true. We should always remember that we are worth more than we think (redundant!). Good morning, dear! ❤❤❤
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HAHA! Redundant is FINE, Maria! :D:D 😀
You have a great week! Alright? ❤
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You too, dear. A great and stress-free week. 🙂 ❤
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Stress-free is a choice, I think? 😀 Thank you! YOu, do, too, dearie. Alright? ❤ ❤ ❤
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True! Sure dear. Haha. Then let’s choose a stress-free mode. 😀
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yeah! I will choose that despite the fact that I am currently in sabaw mode after writing two hardcore tech articles. HAHA ❤
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“sabaw mode” … HAHA! How does this look like? Hmm. I’m sure you beat the hell out of those tech articles dear. 😀
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HAHA. Thank you, Maria!! 😀 😀 😀 I barely! 😀
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Very well said and written. ” I am more than what you can see or feel. No words could speak my worth.” A fantastic ending to empowering poem for a woman. It’s like Beyonces song “Girls.”
“Who run the world Girls…”
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Yay! thank you for associating that fierce song to this poem! YEAH! We run the world! 😀
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You’re Welcome. Beyoncé has the greatest woman power anthems, since Destinies Child to her recent album 🙂 Yours has that power anthem quality 🙂
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I would agree! 😀 And that is so sweet of you to say! ❤ ❤ ❤
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oh wow I like this form a lot. I am going to have to try it sometime 🙂 Great poem reminding guys about our worth 🙂
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Yay! I would love to read yours, Mel! Thank you! 🙂 Guys nowadays seldom respect us. Maybe because of the trend of portraying women as commodities. Which is never true.
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You’re welcome and you’re right about some guys. There are still a lot who do respect and value women. (the ones whose mothers raised them right)
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That is so true. There are some, a few. 🙂
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🙂
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❤
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🙂 May you always encounter them 🙂
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And you too! 🙂 ❤
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🙂 I hope so
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I believe! 😉
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🙂
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😉
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“No words can speak my worth”Can I raise my glass and toast to that? Cheers! Powerful note to end on and I wouldn’t have wanted it any other way. Great poem, Rosema!
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Raise it up and CHEERS!! Girl Power dear Jade! 😀
Thank you very very much for catching up, my friend! ❤ ❤ ❤
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This is so powerful. Put elegantly and truthfully and …. perfect 🙂 I’ll just stick to that instead of blabbering on 😀 You have a beautiful soul, dear 🙂 Stay blessed always.
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Thank you very much! ❤ ❤ ❤ Perfect is more than enough, my dear! And remember that YOU are a beautiful soul, too! ❤
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Aww, thank you ❤
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i should thank YOU! ❤
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