Counting Birds
It’s that time of the year again. Flock of little birds swing in electric ropes. Their sweet chirps signal morning’s hope. My eyes are wet again, whenever I see them. How time flies.
My little girl, my first angel, learned numbers when she was barely two by counting those little singers. One… two… become sixteen… to twenty-two.
Gripping my soft blanket, I resist the urge to cry out loud, my husband and my newborn might wake up.
I can’t add up those pigeons any more. My always little girl can count them because she has the best view from heaven.
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Word count: 100 words
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Photo credit: Roger Bultot
In response to Friday Fictioneers prompt for 06 May 2016.
Friday Fictioneers is a weekly writing challenge hosted by the generous Fairy Blog-Mother Rochelle Wisoff-Fields, where a photo is used as a prompt for a piece of fiction.
oh no, the poor dear–this one’s a bittersweet tale.
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thank you very much! ❤ Yes… I killed another one in this blog. Death toll rising.
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You’re welcome 🙂 I can’t comment on the death toll since a certain prince has been decimating folks on my blog recently 😉
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Yeahhhhh! So your own death toll is rising too???
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Yes 🙂
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*high five*
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🙂 *high five* indeed!
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❤ ❤ ❤
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🙂
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Emotionally gripping …
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Hi Fetina! 🙂 Thank you very much! 🙂 🙂 🙂 Glad to e-meet you here. 🙂
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your welcome.. Its my pleasure 🙂
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🙂
will drop by on your lovely blog soon! 🙂
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that would be an honor 🙂
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a pleasure for me. 🙂
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So touching and so sad. Heaven–of course, that’s good. But for those still on earth, so hard.
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Thank you for yet again another poetic comment. ❤ Yes. That is true. Heaven is good, to think about it. It's a better place. Though it's painful too, specially for those who are left behind.
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Aww, this was bittersweet! Very well penned!
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Bittersweet is indeed my goal. 🙂 Thank you very very much! 😀
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Awwee… bittersweet indeed. But there is a hint of peace and acceptance in your story that made me smile dear. Thanks for the warm story. ❤
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Thank you for reading beyond words, dear Maria. Yes. The peace and acceptance is there. 🙂 The pain is still there. Well it will surely remain. But with peace and acceptance, mother can look forward to brighter days. 🙂
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Surely. There’s a rainbow always after the rain, so the song says. 🙂 This one’s a great inspiration to us all.
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I agree! So agree dear. ❤
thank youuuu!
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Always a pleasure, Rosema. ❤ You're ispiring us a lot these days. Thank you! ^^
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awwwwwww. Really??? In what way???
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Your words dear… you never run out of optimism and good vibes. ^^
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awwww. Thank you! That is despite the fact that I am killing someone every week!
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Hahaha! There’s always a lesson learned from each of them still. 🙂
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I agree to that dearie. 😉
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[…] *For those of you who are not aware, I and my dear friend/soul sister Rosema have taken on a “Dear” series. This is our 4th instalment. The earlier ones are all […]
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This brought tears to my eyes. So sad, but yes, there is peace in these words.
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Awwww. Thank you very much! ❤ ❤ ❤ That is such a sweet compliment for me. Though sorry for making you cry dear. ❤
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Oh noooo, this is a very sad tale, but I do love the touch of optimism on your story. The way the mom has accepted the tragedy and is willing to move on, is encouraging and poignant.
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Here is another lovely lady who read beyond my words. ❤ Thank you, Jade! 🙂 Thank you for feeling her, feeling her pain and her peace. 🙂 ❤
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Such a sweet but oh so sad, tale!
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Thank you, PJ! I think a week can’t end without a sad one from me. 😀
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Beautiful heart-grabber.
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Hi Chaillot! 🙂 Thank you very very much! 😀
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Welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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🙂
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😦 you have written it so well. Sad but lovely.
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Thank you, Hemangini. 🙂 Your words mean a lot. ❤
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So sad, and so beautiful. 💕
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thank you very much, Annie. The death toll is rising. 😀 😀 😀
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