Earth’s Tenants: An Envelope Quintet*
We’re just tenants and not owners
of this world called earth–
witness to billions of death, birth,
mystery’s it’s worth.
So let’s live and not be mourners.
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In response to Napowrimo Day 22. (yes, I’m catching up! :D)
Today’s prompt comes to us from Gloria Gonsalves, who also suggested our prompt for Day Seven. Today, Gloria challenges us all to write a poem in honor of Earth Day. This could be about your own backyard, a national park, or anything from a maple tree to a humpback whale.
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Envelope Quintet (Italian) is a 5 line verse in which the center lines are enclosed by the rhyme of the outer lines.
The Envelope Quintet is:
- stanzaic, a quintet may be a stand alone poem or can be written in any number of 5 line stanzas.
- meter at the discretion of the poet.
- rhymed abcba or aabaa or abbba , subsequent stanzas may link or continue the rhyme scheme: linked abcba cdedc or abcba deced / continued is simply abcba defed etc.
I quite like this form. And yes, you did fantastic, dear girl
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Thank you very much my lovely Nandita!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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lovely, again!
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Thank you very much, Ipsita! 😀 😀 😀
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Yes rose we are all tenant of t his heavenly blue planet called earth ….. !!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 well written …
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Thank you! Glad you agree. 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 yes I do 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Amen to that! We definitely do not own the earth. We need to live and rejoice and be happy and grateful for what we have and treasure it.
P.S. I’m so glad you’re catching up with NaPo 🙂 Yay! 😀
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Thank you NJ!!! You surely got the message! 😀 You got keen clear eyes, eh? 😀
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YAY!!! Thank you!! The remaining prompts are quite hard! But I’ll try! 😀
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Oh, I’m sure you’ll do just fine with the prompts. Even if you can’t, well, it doesn’t take away from the various forms you’ve written so far 🙂
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That is so sweet of you to say!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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We’re just tenants and not owners
of this world
What a wonderful take on this insight. We don’t own Earth; we are its stewards. But it behooves us, too, to celebrate that. It’s amazing to be living, after all. Thanks for this message!
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That is so true, Christopher. It’s a statement I once heard and it stuck to me since. Glad to have written a poem about it. 🙂 Thank you!
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The loveliest envelope I’ve ever read. Lovely just like you, sweet friend. ☺️Well done!
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Geeez! That is so sweet of you, Annie!!! ❤
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Beautiful, Rosema!
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Thank you, dear PJ!! 😀 😀 😀
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Hear hear to that poem! Meaningful message that needs to be heard!
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Thank you, Jade!!! This is something we always forget, that our time here on earth is limited. 🙂
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Nice. Well done on this. I like the word tenants but I think I like caretakers a bit more. Shows we have a great responsibility, not just witnessing, and letting earth be destroyed. Sorry not to cause, argument, jus how I see it:)
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I would agree. 🙂 No need to say sorry. Tenants is the word used in the phrase that inspired this poem, thus, its what I chose to use. 🙂 Nonetheless, thank you my friend!
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this is a lovely reminder of a truth we take for granted every day 🙂
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I would agree. Our earth needs a lot of nurturing. We’ve destroyed it direly already…
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yes we have, but it’ll heal if we curbed our destructive ways.
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That is so true. Though there is awareness, little do curb their destructive ways.
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Very true 😦
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Sadly true. -_-
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We need to scream this over and over and over again so we’ll remember where we stand. Mankind acts as if they own the Earth when in fact we’re all just petty tenants. Powerful poem dearieeee!
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Oh how I hope screaming can bury the thought in everyone’s head. *sigh* thank you very much dear Maria! ❤ ❤ ❤
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