Victor’s Crown: Villanelle
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Whom shall I fear?
is it the sea of grief?
I think I know the answer.
Soul’s dark, nothing’s clear
enemy’s so fast so brief,
whom shall I fear?
Waiting in pain, rescue’s not near
should I jump in sadness’ cliff?
I think I know the answer.
Hope burned not just seared,
faith stolen by mighty thief,
whom shall I fear?
No one sees or even hear,
am I like a forgotten leaf?
I think I know the answer.
I am not alone, my Redeemer’s here
With victor’s crown he’s my life’s chief
Whom shall I fear?
I think I know the answer.
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Photo credit: Micah. H
In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge: V is for Villanelle
Villanelle (a rustic, peasant song or dance) is an intricate French verse that is distinguished by its pastoral subject matter and alternating refrain. A member of the Rondeau family, it expands on the Rondeau’s signature, “rentrement”, a repetition of the 1st line or phrase as a refrain, by also including the 3rd line as an alternating refrain. The Villanelle originated in the 15th century becoming standardized by the 17th century.
The Villanelle is:
- metered, primarily iambic pentameter.
- in French stanzaic, written in any number of tercets and finally ending in a quatrain.
- in English, written in a total of 19 lines, made up of 5 tercets and ending with a quatrain.
- L1 and L3 of the first stanza, alternate as the refrain in the following tercets.
- composed with L1 and L3 of the first tercet repeated as the last two lines of the poem.
- written with only 2 end rhymes with a rhyme scheme of A¹bA², abA¹, abA², abA¹, abA², abA¹A².
- originally composed with a pastoral theme.
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I adore this Villanelle. It could be a praise song! Excellent writing!
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Yay! Glad to hear that, dear! Thank you!
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I love this villanelle; it’s a hard form to master but you conquered it beautifully. That last stanza is awesome 🙂
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Thank you very much my dearest, Mel! ❤ ❤ ❤
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Good one 😊😊
Whom shall I fear 😄😄
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No one, right? 😀 😀 😀 Thank you, Dixita! ❤
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Yes
No one 🙂
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🙂
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Whom shall I fear?
I think I know the answer
No one is to be feared
❤ ❤ This is such a morale, confidence boosting poem 🙂
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Amen! No one! 😀 Thank you, dear! ❤
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Your answer to the question, shown through the poem, is real. We can learn from it. “Hope burned”, “faith stolen”–and yet we’re not alone. Even when we feel no hope or faith, the source of hope and faith is there. Strongly encouraging work, Rosema!
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Amen!!! Thank you very much for getting the message and interpreting it on your own, Christopher! ❤
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And I think I know the answer… Lovely, lovely words Rosema and so true. Your words never fail to amaze me. 😀
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Thank you because you know the answer, my dear Maria! ❤ ❤ ❤ Blessings to you!
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Beautiful words fitting for God, the only One to fear. Lovely. ☺️
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Thank you, Annie! Your comment affirmed I was able to send the message successfully. 😀 Thank you! And amen! 😀
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You’re always welcome! ☺️
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❤ ❤ ❤
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