Underdog: An Ushnik
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Cheers are shouted for my foe
on my ears boos come and go
they believe I’ll run and flee
round one’s done, the winner’s me.
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Photo credit: Martin Kníže
In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge: U is for Ushnik
Ushnik (God of Wind orignating from the hairs of the body of the almighty Prajāpati) is a stanzaic Vedic meter. The 7th horse pulling the golden chariot of the sun god is named for this meter.
The defining features of the Ushnik are:
- stanziac, any number of quatrains, 4 padas or lines.
- syllabic, lines of 7 syllable each.
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That’s cool! Never heard of Ushnik before, and it’s from my country! Thanks for doing this!
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yay! thank you very much for reading, Vijaya! 😀
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But why foe?
Who’s the foe?
Or, is it just a made up one?
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This is a poem told by a fictional boxer who fought against a crowd favorite. 🙂
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Oooh, how interesting, I’ve never heard of these. It’s fab. ~Liz http://www.lizbrownleepoet.com
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Hi Liz! Thank you very much for reading and for your lovely comment! 😀
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Nice, catchy!
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Yay! Thank you, Mandi!
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I agree with Mandi, catchy! The rhyme and rhythm make this a treat to retreat. Not to mention the theme of the underdog–yay!
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YAy! Thank you very much! This one is tough form to write. 🙂
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This is a very lyrical and catchy poem. I’ve never heard of this style before either but I may just be using it in the future! Seems like a lot of fun 🙂
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Yay! I would love to read your own Ushnik, Jade! 😀 Thank you!
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You make writing these different poetry styles look so easy, Rosema!
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geez! Glad to know that, Jade! I believe you can them them all my dear. 😉
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I like this form! Great little poem that tells quite the story 🙂
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Yay! Glad you got the story my dear! ❤ Thank you! ❤
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I did 🙂 You’re welcome
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Yay! 😀 😀 😀
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🙂
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❤
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This is cute!! I like it!
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Yay! Thank you very much, PJ!
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🙂 🙂
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❤
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Is there any form of poetry that you can’t write? 😛 Four lines and the story is told perfectly! 🙂 ❤ Cheering you on to write more and more and more forever…. (did I make sense?) 😀
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HAHA! You did, my NJ! ❤ Thank you very mcuh! I think there are forms I cannot write, especially the long ones. 😀 I tend to love the short ones, eh. 🙂
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Argh! I MUST memorize this by heart! Great thinking dear. As always. 🙂
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Geez! That’s really an interesting coincidence, right dear? 🙂 🙂 🙂 But yeah… you can surely know them down. 😀
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I think God used your words as a voice. I’m really glad for them, Rosema. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Oh… thank you very much!!! 🙂 I am blessed, so blessed to hear that my dear, ❤
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You are a blessing dear.. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you!! Remember that you are too. 😀
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Short yet packed. Great one. ☺️
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Just like your comment. Short but packed!!! 😀 😀 😀 Thanks, dear! ❤
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Most welcome, Rosema. 💕
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❤ ❤ ❤
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