Stead: A Shape Poem
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
I
am a
reflection
of the loved-home I am
from. My writer-self comes
from the genes of my mom. While
my singer-self’s the influence of my dad.
My friendly-self was developed
‘cause I’m the eldest among six.
My dreamer-self was honed by
our life’s tough– messy tricks.
All that I am, and all that I will
soon become, I owe to nothing
but the home where I am from.
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Photo credit: Arno Smit
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Sharing with you a photo of my real ‘home’:
In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge: S is for Shape Poetry
Shape Poetry is also associated with Concrete Poetry-
Shape is one of the main things that separate prose and poetry. Poetry can take on many formats, but one of the most inventive forms is for the poem to take on the shape of its subject. Therefore, if the subject of your poem were of a flower, then the poem would be shaped like a flower. If it were of a fish, then the poem would take on the shape of a fish. ><<<*>
Shape and Concrete Poetry go hand-in-hand; however, Concrete or Visual Poetry don’t have to take on the particular shape of the poem’s subject, but rather the wording in the poem can enhance the effect of the words such as in this line:
an angel tumbling d o w n to earth . . .
Designing your own shape poem can be simple and fun, but try not to pick anything that would be too difficult. We suggest mapping out or drawing your shape first, and then importing the text of your poem into your shape.
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Wonderful poem. I love that you contribute your personal success, what you are to your family. You have good values 🙂
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Thank you very much, Mandi! I guess that one’s still from my home. 🙂 ❤
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You honor your family through this shape-poem tribute. This is up-arrow, as it should be. The word-choice, rhyming, and meter make for smooth and engaged reading. I trust you’ve shared this with your folks and your sibs (and lots of others).
It’s a delight to see your family in the photo!
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Thank you very much for another insightful comment! 🙂 Can be an up-arrow, though my imagination is that it looks like a home. HAHA.
Thank you! 😀
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Aside from my being dense, I guess homes can look like arrows, which is maybe not such a bad metaphor.
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NOPE! Never. 😀 It’s a great metaphor actually! ❤
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Wow!!! This is amazing! I love it!!!
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Yay! Thank you, Debbie! 😀
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aww this is a wonderful tribute to your family 🙂 Reading your poems is like breathing fresh clean air; you have such light, love and innocence about you. Your poems make me feel less jaded.
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Thank you very much for your kind words my dear friend. ❤ ❤ ❤ I am glad this poem from my heart make you feel less jaded. ❤ ❤ ❤
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You’re welcome and it does 🙂
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Geez! that’s so heartwarming to know. 😀
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🙂
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❤
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Aww this is adorable. Your family is adorable too 🙂 Happy, happy smiles all around 🙂 ❤
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YAY! Thank you very very much! Have you figured who am I in that photo? 😀
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Are you the one (pinkish top and creamish skirt) standing behind your lil sister? Second from the left?
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Yeah. The one with layered calories. 😀 😀 😀
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I just couldnt stay without appreciating this piece.So beautifully presented
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oh wow. thank you very much! 🙂
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Wonderful presentation and an Interesting blog.
Here links to the two Genre I am entering with in A to Z challenge . Do visit and reflect esp. the poetry blog
Festivals of India – Simhastha 2016 – http://facetsofadishortstories.blogspot.in/2016/04/s-for-simhastha-or-ujjain-simhastha.html
Poetry – Quiver http://facetsofadienglish.blogspot.in/2016/04/q-for-quiver.html
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Thank you for your kind words. 🙂 will visit soon! 🙂
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This is very heartwarming and I can see the shape of the house, too. Really clever, my dear friend. 💕
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Wow! You got a clear eye, Annie! that’s indeed a house. 😀
Thank you very much!
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