Ode to Old-ies
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Their crowns aren’t made
of gems that don’t fade.
Theirs are mix of greys and whites,
no glitters, just wise lights.
So as the dusk of dawn
erases their minds wits,
as their neurotic lawns
be filled with dried twigs,
to respect and love them
we musn’t forget,
cause their grey crowns aren’t
that easy to get.
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Photo credit: Ismael Nieto
In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge: O is for Ode.
The Ode (from Greek – aeidein “to sing or chant”) is a genre of poetry in which the subject is praised, exalted or favorably contemplated.. The term “ode” is concerned more with its exalted theme than the structure of the poem, although there are variations that do incorporate specific structure or frame in their delivery.
The ode displays three qualities, focus on one subject or object, an extended and elaborated description of the subject and last, a celebratory or praising tone. Edmund Gosse defined the ode as “enthusiastic and exalted lyrical verse, directed to fix purpose and dealing progressively with one dignified theme.” The ode is normally formal and often lengthy, however there are some beautiful odes that are neither lofty nor lengthy. The structure or frame varies depending on the type of ode written. The earliest odes can be traced back to Ancient Greece.
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It’s Beautiful … Rose… And yes it’s not easy to get… Loved the lines… Short and very meaningful…. And thank you for sharing the added information … 👏👏👏😊🙌
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Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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It is lovely to see a tribute to our elderly folk Rose 🙂
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thank you, Judy! they absolutely deserve it! 🙂
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Lovely description and fitting picture.
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Thank you dear, Mandi! 😀
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a beautiful ode to couples who deserve it 🙂
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indeed! thanks, Mel!! 😀 Will catch up reading soon! 😀
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No pressure 🙂 catch you when you can
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I catch up reading yesterday. Will do today. 😀
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😍😍😍
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yay! Thank you! I would take those emojis as complements. 😀
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Aww.. so sweet! I’m sure our Lolos and Lolas will be happy when they read this one. 😀
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i believe so! 🙂 thank you dear!
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❤ I've lost mine but I'm sure they're smiling at you for this. (I don't mean to scare) XD
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Awww. ❤ ❤ ❤ Thank you for the smiles, lo and la. ❤
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❤❤❤
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❤
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Aww.. it’s as if the beautiful lady (she’s got a gorgeous and infectious smile!) is smiling and happy at your words 🙂
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awwww! thank you for looking at her like that! 😀 😀 😀
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so sweet…
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thank you! 🙂
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Very touching Rosema. Thank you!
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thank you, Leanne! 🙂 Oldies deserve it. 🙂
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A beautiful poem about a beautiful subject. Ah, old love. One of the the purest examples of love, I think.
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That is so true!! Old couples are like a beautiful, very beautiful reminder that true/pure love can happen. ❤
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Ooohhh! that’s such a sweet one Rosema… Loved each line..Very wisely thought about ❤
Cheers,
Srivi – AtoZChallenge
O for Obsession | Twitter
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Thank you very much, Srivi! They deserve this ode, right? 🙂
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A monumental tribute!! I absolutely love it! 😀
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thank you very much, Dajena! 😀
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The photo is endearing. Life lined in years of expression. The poem’s better; the metaphor of crown–grey over gold–is wise. (Yes, you’re wise again.) A respectful, wonderfully-crafted praise of aged persons.
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I am wise according to a wiser man so I am just blissful! 😀 Thank you very much! 😀 😀 😀
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