Piano’s Pause
Come, lay, your soft skilled fingers on me.
Replay, retrace, our once shared melody–
sweet chants our souls create, before you left me .
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Jesse Orrico
In response to Sonya of Only 100 Words‘ Three Line Tales Week Eleven.
If you want to join (it’s not too late and it is surely fun), here are the simple rules:
- Write three lines inspired by the photo prompt.
- Link back to this post.
- Tag your post with 3LineTales (so we can find you in the Reader).
- Read and comment on other TLT participants’ lines.
- Have fun.
beautiful
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thank you dear! ❤
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Euphony ☺
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geez! What a lovely word, Dixita! Thank you! ❤
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Mellifluous poetry deserve magical ☺ words .
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awww. you’re just so sweet! ❤
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Beautiful poem, but so sad. Wonderful, Rosema!
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thank you, PJ! thank you very much! 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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🙂 🙂
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hope you are having a great weekend dear! 🙂
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Thank you, Rosema! I hope you had a wonderful weekend! I think maybe your weekend is over now?
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Nope. It’s a sunday night when we’re chitchatting. Now it’s officially over. 😀
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thank you, PJ! thank you very much! 🙂
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Wow! This screamed at me…I did this just a few minutes ago on my own piano…a piece I once knew and played with my eyes closed for years on end I struggled to get through-my bad!!! It is sad! My mind knows the notes…my fingers have forgotten…I can almost play the piece better if I do not look at the manuscript??? My bad!!!
Thank you for this!!!
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Hi! 🙂 Thank you very much for sharing your own story. 🙂 It is quite fascinating how the mind still remembers though the fingers have forgotten. 🙂
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By the way…It is Chopin’s Nocturne Opus 9, No. 2 : lovely
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That’s lovely! Thank you for sharing! 🙂 Maybe you can play it again and remind your fingers? 🙂
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May they reunite for the sake of love for music to create many memorable melodies in a days to come.
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Hi Era! Thank you very much! 😀 😀 😀 ❤ ❤ ❤
I think they will reunite beautifully. 🙂
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beautiful poem, each line sings! 🙂
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‘each line sings’! Geez! Love that line, Mel! ❤
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤ thank you!
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🙂 You’re welcome
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So overwhelming. Very well written. 🙂
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Hi Ishita! Thank you very much! 🙂 Glad to see you for the first time! 🙂 I hope we can know each other more! 🙂
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This really reminds me of an anime I watched a few months ago.
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Thank you, Anan! May I know what anime is that? 🙂
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Shigatsu Wa Kimi No Uso. Man the feels.
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OOOH! Wow! A lovely and interesting anime!
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My friends are still crying over the ending. ;(
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geez. i think i have to watch it!
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Go ahead. The animation is awesome! The story too.
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will take note of that! thank you! 🙂
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Aww… don’t let the piano go! There is still so much melody to be belted out by it. This is so touching and heart-warming and sad, all at once.
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Geez! That’s a very heart melting comment, NJ! Thank you very much! ❤ ❤ ❤
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[…] Piano’s Pause […]
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Thank you for the pingback! 🙂
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How sad… I read it from an actual piano’s POV, but it might be a person, I suppose. Nice work 🙂
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Thank you, Sonya. 🙂 You got it. 🙂 It’s the piano itself that’s longing for the pianist. 🙂
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The piano certainly becomes a strong, evocative metaphor. Once again, I admire the turn.
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Thank you very much, Christopher! I wanted to convey the feeling of once-loved then abandoned piano. 🙂 Thank you!
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You convey it! Strongly–and sadly.
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thank you!! 🙂
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Simply beautiful! I hope they play the music again… ❤
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i think his heart still remembers. thus, they will play again!
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YAY!! ❤ ❤ ❤ Looking forward to that day!
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Lovely lines… yes music is evocative! Nice and creative. 🙂
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Hi Iris! Thank youuuu! your points are true! ❤
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Hi, it’s a pleasure! Have a lovely day. ❤ 🙂
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Thank youuu! Will be visiting your lovely poetic abode soon. 🙂
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