Numbered Days: A Naani
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Let me spend
my last few breaths and what’s left of me,
to show you for the last time,
how do I love thee.
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Photo credit: Gerard Moonen
In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge: N is for Naani.
The Naani is a stanzaic form found at Shadow Poetry and is most often an observation of human relations or current events although it can be open to any subject. Naani means “an expression of one and all”. The stanza form was introduced by Dr. N. Gopi an administrator at the Teluga University.
The defining features of the Naani are:
- stanzaic, written in any number of quatrains.
- syllabic, with a total syllable count of between 20 and 25 syllables.
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Pretty piece. Done well
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thank you for your poignant, touching words my friend. 🙂
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Awww~ breathtakingly gorgeous! ❤ ❤ Kilig!!!
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yay! thank you for the *kilig* commen dear Dajena! 😀 ❤
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Oh, so sweet. 🙂 ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Very beautiful! And the photo is a perfect match to it.
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thank you very much, Lucile! Old couples who remain so loving fascinates and inspires me, always. 🙂
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You’re most welcome!! Agree, it’s very inspiring, and I dare say that’s rare, as many couples kind of just got married without much love and complicity. Thanks!
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That is so true. Rare is the words, Lucile. 🙂
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This is so loving and I miss my granny now .
@dixita011 from
Cafenined words
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aww. I believe your grandpa and grandma shared a lovely love story too? 🙂
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Yes 😊😊
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awww. glad to hear that. ❤
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Aww, I wish their love lasts forever and ever 🙂
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i think their love will. ❤ thanks dear!
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Awww, I love this! And seeing the picture along with the poem was so heart touching!
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glad the photo fits the poem. 🙂 I am almost delighted when I see old couples still holding hands. I admire them and when I see one, I also whisper a prayer that I’ll have someone who will hold my hand until I’m old and grey. 🙂
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That is a wonderful prayer to have, Rosema! I truly hope you have someone to hold your hand for the rest of your life too!
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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aww, what a sweet poem 🙂
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thank you dear Mel! Old couples always fascinates me. I adore them… they are the best sign that forever exists. (Sorry, I’m getting to cheesy here. HAHA)
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Not too cheesy, I agree with you. I too find old couples to be inspiring. I used to want to be them one day but that is looking less and less likely as the years go by. you’re welcome 🙂
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everything is possible my dear. 🙂 There are some women who are destined for such. I have three aunts who are now almost at their 60s and they remained single. plus one uncle. (on my mom’s side). I think when you desire it it can happen. 🙂 ❤
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true, though I do like my solitude 🙂
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Hmmm. It’s really about your heart’s desire. 🙂 So desire what will make you happy. ❤ ❤ ❤
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I hope that’s what I’m desiring!
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Desire what will make you happy. You deserve it. 😘
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I am working towards achieving what I desire. It’s a long road though.
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a looong road indeed. but definitely worth it, I guess. 🙂 ❤
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🙂 I’m glad it was worth it
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I believe it will be. ❤
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A pledge with “my last few breaths and what’s left of me, . . .” Beautiful words from a beautiful heart, willing to risk it all. Thanks for making this moment, Rosema.
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Geez! Your comments never fail to make me smile, Christopher! Really! 🙂
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Then we have smiles all around! Thank you!
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That is true! 😀 Thanks!
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