Mirror: A Monorhyme
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Look me in the eye,
remove your mask of lie,
listen to your own sigh,
touch you deeper ‘I’.
No one knows why,
deep inside you die,
though you can try,
to let go and just cry.
When your tears run dry,
and you’ve bid goodbye
to hatred and lie,
you can finally fly.
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Photo credit: Thomas Brault
In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge: M is for Monorhyme.
A Monorhyme is a poem in which all the lines have the same end rhyme.
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I love that line, “listen to your own sigh.” Thank you!
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Hi Fida! 🙂 Thank you very much! 🙂 I love that line, too! ❤
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That must be really hard to have a poem ending with the same rhyming pattern. Good job!
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It is quite tough, PJ, but totally worth it because I love rhymes. 😀
Thank you very much! 🙂
And… how are you?
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I love rhymes too!
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yay! 😀 😀 😀
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I’m not going to lie. This brought a tear to my eye. I’m so glad I came by! 😛
Great writing here. It can be challenging to use a rhyming scheme such as this and be successful as you have done! Perfection. xxoo
~Matt
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Hi Matt! Your kind words painted a sweet morning smile in my face. Thank you very much. ❤
And thank you for the follow. 🙂
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🙂 what a great way to start a morning!
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yeah! so thank you, Matt! 🙂
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Nice job. You have to go through the pain to gain right?
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i would say yes. and when we’re able to get over that pain, we rise as better persons. ❤
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another cool form! You are on a roll! You go girl! 🙂 this is a deep and probing poem, I can feel the anger and hurt behind the words. This is fictional right? digital hugs to you!
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thank you for the ‘you go girl’ my dear Mel! and for the warm digital hugs. ❤ ❤ ❤
Yes… this is fictional… though I have a character in mind. 🙂 Thank youuuuu! ❤ *hugs* back to you!
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I’m fine, just trying to stay cool! hahaha!
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haha! me too!! it’s spring already right???
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Yes, it is spring and warming up quite a bit. But not yet time to turn on our air conditioners.
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awww… it’s a nicer weather then.. here… the hottest temp is not at 51 degree Celsius.
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51 degree Celsius is about 84 degrees Fahrenheit isn’t it?
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google converter says 51 degree celcius is 123.8 degrees Fahrenheit… 😀
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I saw there “I”
U r so good why!
I got to c d sky
Wen ur poems com by!
love : )
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geez! that’s a lovely poetic comment dear!!! ❤ ❤ ❤ thank you for making my day extra special! ❤
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Simply beautiful, Rosema! Smoothly done. I love everything about this! ❤
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Geez. Your words really have a soothing effect on me my dear Maria. That’s why I’m missing you. ❤
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And so are yours.. ❤ I enjoyed reading your posts! (Though a bit late) Hehe. Glad boss got an emergency today so I'm free! 😀
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Late is better my dear. And don’t worry. 🙂 Job happens, often! 😀
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Superb …
This is story of everyone of us .
.we need to fly and stop to lie to our own conscience.
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So true! Only after letting go of the past can we soar into the future 🙂 Your poems are so uplifting and so down to earth 🙂
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Awww. Your comment really warm my heart my dear, NJ! Thank you for seeing me beyond my words. ❤
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Such a heartfelt poem which really did hit me…My favorite is this part: ‘No one knows why, deep inside you die, though you can try, to let go and just cry.’
In such simple words you have explained the complex thing of letting it go…
As usual, loved it ❤ ❤ 🙂
M for Mind
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Thank you Srivi! 🙂
Sometimes, it’s not the pain inflicted that really kills us but our not letting go. Nonetheless, I can never say it is easy to let go and forgive. Right? 🙂
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I don’t even know which line to pick because the entire poem is so lovely and heartwarming! Great job, my friend 🙂
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YAY! That’s another touching comment my friend Jade! ❤ Thank you!
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Just lovely. You’re so talented. 🙂 I have a Monorhyme lined up for one of the letters. 🙂
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yay! excited to read yours, Annie! ❤ ❤ ❤ thank you!
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Beautiful! You are just getting better and better right here in front of my eyes.. sigh.. what an inspiration to see you dive deep into these waters of writing! I am learning a lot from you sweet Princes! Please have a beautiful weekend! ❤
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Geez! Coming from a wise and skilled writer, it really means a lot to me dear Dajena! Thank you very much! I am surrounded by mature, great and inspiring writers like you. 🙂 Your talents are just contagious, thus, I’m infected. 😀
Thank you! and have a beautiful weekend too!
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We always learn from each other. If we ever stop, that will be the end of the ink 😀 ❤ ❤
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That is true! 😀
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The last two lines are kind of chilling–they speak so well to truth (even about lying). Great work for M, Rosema!
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Thank you very much, Christopher! 🙂
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