Giggling Innocence: A San San*
Your sweet giggling innocence
screams, awakes asleep mem’ry.
Mind’s screaming silence now ends
as I hear soothing cadence,
your voice soothes chained spirit free.
Screaming silence now giggles,
your giggling innocence sends
soothing cadence that tickles.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Danielle MacInnes
In response to Daily Post: Giggle and Napowrimo Day 14.
Today’s prompt comes to us from TJ Kearney, who invites us to try a eight-line poem called a san san, which means “three three” in Chinese (It’s also a term of art in the game Go).
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*San San
The san san has some things in common with the tritina, including repetition and rhyme. In particular, the san san repeats, three times, each of three terms or images. The eight lines rhyme in the pattern a-b-c-a-b-d-c-d.
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I repeat giggle, soothe and scream. 🙂
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Read more of my Napowrimo 2016 poems here!
omg
there r so mny kinds!
Can u guess how mny cud b in total?
I m seriously curios
to kno
n
to learn!
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Hi lovely. To tell you honestly, I have no idea how many. More are being invented, so maybe the list is growing. 🙂
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Okk then!
Lets invent one!
(smiling)
hugs
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that would be tough, but exciting!!! 😀
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smiling
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what does that smile mean? 😀 😀 😀
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Smile
means
positivity
possibility
No?
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yeahhh! smiling back! ❤
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cheers
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Cheers! ❤
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I am kind of allergic (sensational feeling) to dust… Even this picture creates a sensational feeling in my leg rising upward into me… That’s actually giggling in nature… And it’s san san feeling ….
And I enjoyed reading it… Giggles my mind !! 🙌👏😊😅😅
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HAHA! Thank you for your witty comment! 🙂
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Ha ha ha my pleasure rose !! 😊🙌🌻🙌😊 keep smiling 😊
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i will! 😀 you too! 😉
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That is one cute picture and poem. So many style and you do a marvellous job!
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Yay! Thank you, Indy! I’m just trying so hard. Prompts are getting more complex and tricky. 🙂
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This is such a innocent piece full of clear hearted giggles and warmth 🙂
Loved the picture that added to the charm of this piece ❤
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yay! thank you very much for reading the words and noticing the photo, Era! ❤
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When we were growing up, we played in the sand with lots of laughter and we called it san san as well.
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ooooh!! that’s interesting! 🙂 Such a fun memory, eh? ❤
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Yep. Some times, I wish I could wind the clock just a little bit and play those kind of innocent games again.
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yeah.. those were some lovely days, i think. 🙂
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Ohhh, I love it! So sweet!
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yay! thank you, dear PJ! ❤
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Aww… cute little giggling poem ❤ 🙂
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haha! it is giggling with tickles! 😀 thank you, NJ!
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This is such a cute one full of warmth .. 🙂
As usual, loved it ❤
Cheers,
Srivi
The Piscean Me | Twitter
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yay! thank you dear Srivi! ❤ ❤ ❤
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My pleasure Rosema ❤ ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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cool form, I love what you did with it. The poem sparkles with innocence, that first puppy love 🙂
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yay! thank you, Mel! This is a tough form. NaPoWrimo is getting trickier. 😀
puppy love… *smiling sigh*
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Oh! I’m giggling ans screaming in delight with this soothing poem. ❤ 😀
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Geez. It’s so tough to write. I edited it for soooo many times that I almost lost the meaning of it. HAHA.
Thanks dear!
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TRUE! I had a hard time writing mine, too! Geez. XD But, alas, ours turned out well. HAHA
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i agree!! 😀 I am posting mine when I read the description again and got to revise it again because three terms should be repeated three times (i initially mentioned each twice). I almost gave up. HAHA
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TRUE! I actually had to read yours over and over to understand the rules! HAHA. So confusing. And I haven’t decided on my three words yet at that time. XD
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yet you did it beautifully! 😀 😀 😀
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YEY! ❤ ❤ ❤
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😀 😀 😀
My dear… I noticed you’re not around too. What happened? I hope you are fine.
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Make it triple S – Sweet San San 🙂
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yay! sweet san san sounds like a candy name for me. 😀 Thanks dear!
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