Bedtime Aphorism: An Anna*
Moon beam’s
fin’lly here
magneting us
‘neath the bed that’s ours
to share, snuggle
forever,
my dear.
—
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Charlie Hang
In response to Daily Post: Bedtime and Napowrimo Day 13.
The number 13 is often considered unlucky, so today I’d like to challenge you to beat the bad luck away with a poem inspired by fortune cookies.
—
*Anna
The Anna was invented in honor of Arkansas, poet and news columnist, Anna Nash Yarbrough by James R. Gray of California. This creator suggests the theme for this metric verse be love.
The Anna is:
- a heptastich, a poem in 7 lines.
- metric, iambic pattern, L1 dimeter, L2 trimeter, L3 tetrameter, L4 pentameter, L5 tetrameter, L6 trimeter and L7 dimeter.
- unrhymed.
U r d ocean of poems!
my dear
; ))
Gr8 work
LikeLiked by 1 person
oh you are so sweet my dear! ❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Now I wouldn’t mind reading that and snuggling into bed 🙂 It gives such a warm lovely feeling 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
yay! been writing a lot of dark things these past few days so i opt for something sweet for a change
😀
LikeLike
Sweeeet!! ❤❤❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
for a change! 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
“Change is coming…” Oops! Haha. Didn’t mean to campaign.
LikeLiked by 1 person
wait up! who has the ‘change is coming’ slogan? 😀 😀 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hehe.. DU30 dearie… 😉
LikeLike
Sweet dreams 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
indeed it is, Jacq! Thank you! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
A pleasure my dear 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww, my princess is overflowing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
with love, my lovely Nandita! ❤
LikeLike
Hahaha! SWEET!
LikeLiked by 1 person
for a change! 😀 😀 😀
LikeLike
I love it! ❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
haha! thank you! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
A romantic, lyrical, so poetically-arranged sentence. I especially like “magneting” as a verb. And the word compressions that you make (fin’lly, ‘neath). ‘Tis is a favorite of mine to use, though I might swipe–I mean, uh, borrow with all respect–your own.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yay! Here you go again Christopher. Maybe my chubby cheeks flushed! 😀 Thank you very much!
Borrowing is fine, not really borrow because I don’t own them. 😀
And ’tis is the compression for??? 🙂
LikeLike
How gorgeous you make Love sound!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
thank you, Azul. love is beautiful, indeed. ❤
LikeLike
🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
So sweet and filled with love. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yay! Thank you dear! Balancing the vicious and sweet writing. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
☺️
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
[…] sherione1 – I need to study #Bedtime. 18. what is where we were when – before i weep 19. A Reading Writer – Bedtime Aphorism: An Anna* 20. Passion through Poetry – Bedtime 21. Bedtime (a silly poem) – StrangeLander2015 22. […]
LikeLiked by 1 person
[…] no favors – before i weep 3. Fantasy-Fortune Cookie – Poetry – StrangeLander2015 4. Bedtime Aphorism: An Anna* – A Reading Writer 5. Thirteen Unfortunate Fortune Cookie Fortunes – lifelessons – a blog by Judy […]
LikeLiked by 1 person
thank you! 😀
LikeLike