Indak*: An Imayo
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
Drum beats loud jiggly jive, turns hips up, alive,
Guitar strums country folk tunes, brings foot taps so soon,
Trumpet exhales lively noise, awakes nerves and bones,
Saxophone hums sexy notes, heats up bods afloat.
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*Indak is a Tagalog/Filipino word which means to dance in time with music.
Photo credit: Thomas Kelley
In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge: I is for Imayo.
Imayo It seems that whenever I research a Japanese form, it involves an alternating 5-7 or 7-5 syllabic structure. The Imayo (present style) of the 12th century is no exception. This form creates long lines broken by caesura separating 7 and 5 syllables in the line.
The Imayo is:
- a 4 line poem.
- syllabic, written in 12 syllable lines broken by caesura after the 7th syllable.
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I LOVE this one Rose and can almost feel the music! 🙂
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yay! thank you Judy! come on let’s dance! 😀
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🎵🎵🎵🎵🎵
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love your poem, nakakaindak! ❤
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haha! love the nakakaindak! 😀 😀 😀
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You are a true lover of poetry. You make me so happy, my sweet Princess!
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my love for poetry, i inherited from my Queen. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Wow! That’s awesome to hear. My sweet darling Princess 🙂 ❤
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yay! 😀 😀 😀 it’s true!
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Love the energy, the feet tapping and dancing to the drum beats of this wonderful piece 🙂
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yay! thank you Era! 🙂
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Be careful the fire!!!! 🙂 Love it, Rose!!!! 🙂
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haha! thank you my friend! 🙂 🙂 🙂 I will be careful, like a moth! 😀
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Another form, amazing! Love the poem 🙂
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Thank you very much, Azul! 🙂
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I love the rhythm of this poem! I can feel and hear the music 😊
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yay! let’s dance now, Kay!? 😀
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You play nicely with rhythm and music in this poem. Beautiful as always!
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oh thank you so much, Amy! come on let’s dance! 😀
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Love the way different music/instruments make one move or inspire a type of dance. Well done.
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oh thank you, Mandi! I am glad to hear the poem served its purpose. 😀
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I love this, Rosema! So alive… 😀
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it’s a lovely verb, Maria! 😀
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It is! Nakakaindak! 😀
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yay! 😀 thanks, dear!
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I feel like I’m right there watching it LIVE and dancing (or at least trying to) 😀 Haha!
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yay!!! glad this poem did that, NJ! 😀
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Indak. A likable word with an even more likable meaning. Each line of your poem evokes images, sounds, and sensations. Dancing to music and to rhythm. Thanks, Rosema!
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awwww! your comment never failed to make my heart skip a beat, indak it is! Thank you!
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I love this musical, full of energy, dance based poetry ❤
Cheers,
Srivi – AtoZChallenge
I for Inspiration | Twitter
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yay! thank you for sharing your insightful words, Srivi! 😀 Heading to your ‘I’ soon! 😀
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Very cool word Indak. I love the poem. Before it was half done I had a good sense of what the title meant. Interesting form too! You must have done a lot of research for this challenge 🙂
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Yay! You are indeed an intelligent reader because you have sensed the meaning already. 😀
Yes, my friend. It took me a week to complete the AtoZ forms. I am glad Thomas helped me. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂 Did Thomas suggest the forms?
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He didn’t. I asked him if he knows poetry forms that starts with the letters I am having a hard time researching for, like I, J, N, W, X, Y and Z. Then he shared two links and this one proved so informative and helpful: http://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/index.php?showtopic=1236
😀
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oh nice! Thank you for sharing the resource! I am bookmarking it now!
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yay! it is a very helpful site and I am more than glad to share it with you! 😀
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I move my feet to the heartbeat, and my heart gets strum by these cool rhythms. I loved it! And thank you for teaching me a new word besides Kilig 😀 wohoo! Now I know two words in Tagalog 🙂
Love and sparkles to you!! ❤
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yay! your comment felt poetic too, Dajena!!! 😀 😀 😀
yay! congratulations for the second tagalog word my dear!
Love and sparkles back to you lovely! ❤ ❤ ❤
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🙂 Happy to have a great teacher! ❤ ❤
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no. i’m not. you are the teacher! 😀
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In this case, I am the student and I love it!
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you’re just soooo sweet! ❤
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I can feel the rhythm! Brilliant, Rosema. 💕
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let’s dance now, tap tap tap! 😀 Thank you dear!
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This is cute and very lively! I love it!
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yay! thank you dear PJ. 😀
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