Old Rose: A Rhupunt*
(A Fictional Love Letter)
Exudes radiance
sweet, soft fragrance
amid thorn’s glance
my heart sighs fine.
Bold red now fades
with days you aged
my love’s not caged
you are still mine.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Ravi Pinisetti
In response to Daily Post: Tricky and Napowrimo Day 8.
Today, I challenge you to add your own poem to this long tradition, by finding a flower, and versifying in its honor.
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Rhupunt, rhée-pint is as old as Welsh poetry and is found in the earliest writings in the Black Book of Carmarthen (late 12th century). It is the 13th codified Welsh meter, an Awdl,
The Rhupunt is:
- written in a single line with optional length. It may be written in 3, 4, or 5, four syllable phrases. The phrases are mono-rhymed, all except the last phrase.
- most often paired with another rhupunt to form a rhyming couplet.
- stanzaic, the stanza length is optional since the line can be separated by phrase into a triplet, quatrain or cinquain, depending on the number of phrases written.
- rhymed. The internal mono-rhyme changes from line to line or if separated, from stanza to stanza but the end syllable of the line is a linking rhyme from line to line or if separated, stanza to stanza.
xxx A xxx A (xxx A) (xxx A) xxx B
xxx C xxx C (xxx C) (xxx C) xxx Bx x x A
x x x A
x x x A
x x x Bx x x C
x x x C
x x x C
x x x B
I enjoy the poem.
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Thank you! 🙂
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lovely poem in yet another form I am unfamiliar with 🙂
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yay! thank you Mel! I am also just discovering these forms. I just think of the title for the prompt, then whatever letter my main theme will have, i’ll search for a poetic form with that letter. (am i making sense? HAHA) for example, this poem is about Rose, so I looked for a poetic form that starts with R. 😀
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oh that’s a neat way of coming at this 🙂 You’re welcome
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yay! thanks, Mel!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤
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And love lives on ❤
My Era @theerailivedin
The Era I Lived In
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amen, Era! 😀
Thank you!
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thank you for this poem, i enjoy
and happy to discover your blog
Anita
https://femmeetinfos.wordpress.com
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Hi, Anita! Thank you so much for dropping by! It is nice knowing you! 🙂
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same for me
Kisses
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🙂
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Again with these different poetry forms! You’re really pushing the envelope of NaPoWriMo and you’re doing it so well.
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oh thank you Jade! I am loving the new forms I discover everyday. And there is a lot. 😀
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I love the way you are experimenting with different forms, Rose and doing them all so well.This is lovely. 🙂
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oh thank you! your words melt my heart. 🙂 I believe you can also write them. 🙂
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I don’t try that many to be honest! 🙂
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it’s okay. 🙂 if you would want to try, please know i believe you can. 🙂
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That is so nice of you to have faith in me, Rose and I appreciate that 🙂
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you are welcome dear! ❤
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Beautiful ☺
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thank you, dixita! 😀
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Very nice!!
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oh thank you! something sweet to make-up for my 100-word tragic. 😀
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LOL! Yes, you are balancing them out. 😀 😀
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yeah! haha! I am trying hard to not break your heart every time you visit me. 😀
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LOL! I appreciate that, Rosema!
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I really meant it dear! 😀
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❤ ❤ ❤
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This morning my email (blogs I follow by email) from WordPress didn’t come into my email so I don’t know what is going on with WordPress. Can you tell me if you received the FFfAW Challenge post in your email today? I sent it out this afternoon and I can’t tell if it went out to the participants. I would appreciate it!! Thank you!!
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Hi dear PJ! My email notification setting is actually off. But I have seen your FFfAW post. 🙂
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Thank you Rosema!!
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I wasnt able to help dear. Sorry.
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No, you actually did. You told me you saw the post and that told me that it went out to the participants and that was my concern.
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*smiling sigh*
glad to know that. 🙂
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A gorgeous form! I loved it sweet princess! 🙂
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oh thank you romantic-poems Queen, Dajena! 🙂 How’s your birthday? I hope you had a blast! 🙂
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Oh Rosema, you’re killing me with all these forms I never knew! You’re too good at every one of them–I LOVE this poem so much!
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oh dear Azul! I never mean to kill you! 😀
But your words are killing me, too! Will bliss! you are just so sweet! ❤
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Killing me, in that I’m so impressed! xxoo
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No. Don’t get killed. 😀 Haha. Thank you dear! ❤
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Goodness gracious! I never knew so many forms of poetry existed. The scent, the colour and even the flower ages but your love never will. I love it! 🙂 ❤
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awwww! you capture the message so well, NJ! Thank you!
And yes! there are a looooooooooooot! I am just picking the short ones. HAHA! 😀
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simply superb
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oh thank you! 😀
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I love that you are introducing these new forms to us! ☺️ This is lovely!
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Thank you, Annie! It is actually a great experience to learn new forms. It’s tough yet exciting! 🙂
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The poem is suffuse with the warmth of love. The second speaks of love enduring through time. That’s a message for everyone.
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awww. thank you for seeing the essence of this poem, Christopher! 🙂
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I meant to say the second stanza. I think a dog was dog-licking me while I was writing.
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Oh. Okay. 😀
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