Bilin*: A Bop
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer
I have five suitors, whom shall I pick?
First’s stable, yet tainted with dark fables.
Second’s witty, yet looked a bit sickly.
Third’s charming, yet with brusque that’s alarming.
Fourth’s a fresh face, yet skills might be fazed.
Fifth’s a veteran, yet with tendencies to cram.
Among these five suitors whom shall I pick?
I need someone, who can aid chaotic traffic.
Someone who can put food-full plates,
in every house at lowest rates.
Someone who will be honest,
aims for corruption rate at its lowest.
Someone who possess a pure heart,
filled with desire to create not crooked start.
Who among my five suitors will wed me on May?
Should I be nervous or should I be gay?
Whoever wins my kids’ highest vote,
he’ll be my husband for six years of course.
I just hope my billion-people will choose,
the best, the fittest among my suitors.
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*Bilin is a Tagalog/Filipino word which means request, directions, instructions, order, advice.
Photo credit: Pinterest
In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge: B is for Bop
- A recent invention, the Bop was created by Afaa Michael Weaver during a summer retreat of the African American poetry organization, Cave Canem.
- Not unlike the Shakespearean sonnet in trajectory, the Bop is a form of poetic argument consisting of three stanzas, each stanza followed by a repeated line, or refrain, and each undertaking a different purpose in the overall argument of the poem.
- The first stanza (six lines long) states the problem, and the second stanza (eight lines long) explores or expands upon the problem. If there is a resolution to the problem, the third stanza (six lines long) finds it. If a substantive resolution cannot be made, then this final stanza documents the attempt and failure to succeed.
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Haha nice take on Philippine politics plus a dash of poetry to boot. Personally I would choose someone who just won’t burn the whole country down.
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Wow! Salamat! You get that five suitors right? 😀
Hmmm… who will that be? 😀
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I dunno. I have my fingers crossed though!
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Me too. 🙂
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What a quirky and fun poem! Thank you for teaching me my first Filipino word 😀
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Oh that’s your first Filipino word! That makes me want to do my tradition with you… of teaching a word I teach all my blogger friends which now includes you JAde. 🙂
Thank you for your comment! 😀
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Yay! Blogger friends are some of the best kind, methinks 😉 And teach away! I love learning new languages 😀
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yay! 😀 have i used the word *kilig* with you? 🙂
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I’ve seen it before on your previous blog posts. What does the word mean?
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Here it is my lovely friend:
kilig
1. noun. It is the sudden feeling of an inexplicable joy one gets when something romantic or idealistic occurs.
When kilig, one may experience the following:
*butterflies in one’s stomach
*heart melting
*shivers down one’s spine
*irrepressible noises from one’s mouth
*uncontrollable smiling
*an inner conflict between hope of something wished for and reality
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Omgosh I love this word. I am going to have to find ways to incorporate this word!
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yay! if you make a poem out of this word feel free to tag me! 😀
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You are SO talented, you totally blow me away!!!
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Yay! thank you! 😀 I am glad it blow you away. 😀
P.S.
I missed mentioning it but this poem is about the presidential election happening on May here in my little country. 🙂
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Ahh, May–ours will be in November 🙂
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Oh. Interesting! 🙂
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How often do you have elections there? Ours are every 4 yrs.
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Presidential election happens every six years, Azul. 🙂
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Ah, interesting difference 🙂
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right! 😀 you have a candidate in mind already?
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Not really…I’m so not interested in politics; don’t really trust any to tell the truth, and actually Lead the Country… 😉 You’ve probably heard some of the ballyhoo, with Donald Trump as one candidate…total insanity, all about egos and Money!
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haha! yeah I’ve heard quite a lot about the hullabaloo especially about Trump. We have our own share of political craziness here. I think politics is really synonymous to crazy. 😀
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You’re so right about them being synonymous! The church leaders are advising folks to vote for a Christ-follower, but it’s pretty hard to tell who might fit that description–yikes!
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hahahaha! I agree! we’ll never know!
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Crazy 🙂
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yeah! 😀
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🙂
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Great poem!!
I love that you are using this challenge to entertain as well as educate. I LOVE poetry, but I know very little about it. Thank you for sharing not only your amazing talent, but also your knowledge.
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Wow! That’s a lot my dear Kay! I really appreciate it! ❤
This is actually about the upcoming Presidential election here in my country. The five suitors are the five presidential candidate. 🙂 Sorry I missed mentioning that. 🙂
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This reads like a riddle about a family in a land of families. And how the solution affects everyone. Thanks for showing us this form! And happy April second, where you are.
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YAY! Thank you!
A riddle it is. I forgot to mention that this is actually about the Presidential election happening in May here in the Philippines. The five suitors are the five presidential candidates. 🙂
The poem speaker is my mother country, the Philippines. 🙂
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oooo Good to know this one.Nicely done
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Oh thank you! I missed saying this but this poem is about the coming Presidential election here in my country.
Thank you! 😀
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Super thumbs up!
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Thank you Kristel! Who will you vote amoung our country’s suitor? 😀
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I really want the old woman, but I’m just worried she might not endure the whole term if ever she wins. How about you? I really pray for the best of our country.
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Actually, we have the same choice. But now I am torn… if she can still live up to it. Nonetheless, I will vote for a woman pres and a woman vp. 🙂
I pray for that too! 🙂
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Awesome take…well done:-)
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Oh. Thank you so much! 🙂 I forgot to put in my post that this is about the coming election here in my country. 🙂
Nonetheless, thank you!
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Cute poem! Loved it!
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YAY! Thank you. This is about the coming election here in my country. 🙂
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I didn’t realize ya’ll were having elections.
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Yeah. I know you will too. 🙂
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Love the poems. Good luck with the rest of the challenge. 😀
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Hi Sydney! Thank you for reading and commenting! Appreciate it a lot. 😀
Are you in AtoZ Challenge, too? 🙂
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Yes. My theme is sports romances.
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Yeah. Just visited your blog. 🙂
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Haha 5😂😂😂
And will be for 6 years …
well written .
Writing humor via poetry with a message is the toughest task girl…
You took away my heart :**
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Awww. That is so sweet of you, dear! 🙂 Thank you! 😀
And I love you B is for Bibliophile, because I am proudly one too! 😀
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That is quite a choice!! Wonder how you will choose 😉
*Inderpreet/EloquentArticulation*
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hmm. thank you Indy! I am going all out for girlpower. 😀
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I’m so glad I came by – poetry AND politics! A great combination, a la Walt Whitman all the way to Maggie Estep. And I learned stuff too – What bilin means and a new, to me, form of poetry. Cool.
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wow! Walt Whitman comparison is too much but THANK YOU very much! I am so happy you got to visit my humble abode. 🙂 thank you so much!
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I am learning more about various poetry forms here than anywhere else! I so love this one too. I actually end up reading some of them out loud. It is so much fun 😀 And educational. Apart from your poems (I love them) what I really like is the fact that you also give a brief explanation about the poetry form and how it’s used etc. That is actually very sweet of you. It helps newbies like me to explore the wonderland of poetry.
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yay! i am sooooo touched to read your thoughts, NJ! That is my goal, actually, to share the forms and learn with you. 🙂 I am no expert, I am a newbie myself and I would love to explore the vast wonderland poetry with you! 🙂
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Brilliant Bop, Rosema!
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thank you so much, Lori!
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welcome hun
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