Awake: An Aubade


Awake: An Aubade
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer

Glistening warm
golden sun rays
kisses my outer dermis
lightly in haste,
whispers bright luna
has bid goodbye,
bringing with her
glitters of her sky.

Glistening warm
golden sun rays,
tries to dust off
my epic dream’s haze,
tickles the locked
gates of my eyes,
waits for my
sweet morning “hi”.

A poem you
once wrote
when I was still
your life’s
golden sun rays.

Photo credit: Rose Erkul

In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge: A is for Aubade


  • a love poem, most often mourning the parting of lovers while extolling the coming day.
  • constructed at the discretion of the poet, length, stanzaic form, meter and or rhyme. although often a smattering of rhyme is present without any particular rhyme scheme.

82 thoughts on “Awake: An Aubade”

  1. Beautiful poem about sun and sunlight. I love the line “tickles the locked / gates of my eyes” it’s a great image 🙂 well done for the Aubade for letter A.

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      1. Yes, you are absolutely right, and what a description. I think you have written yourself another aubade 🙂 You are welcome, my friend 🙂 ❤

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  2. Oooooh!! Such vivid imagery, Rosema! I love sunrise and I love this too. ❤
    And this line, "A poem you once wrote when I was still your life’s golden sun rays", I can feel there's some deeper meaning to it. 🙂

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