Scattered, cluttered like letters in a boardgame, that was me.
You came, with no shame, say you’re game–
To pick me, fix me, piece by piece.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Moritz Schmidt
In response to Sonya of Only 100 Words‘ Three Line Tales Week Nine.
If you want to join (it’s not too late and it is surely fun), here are the simple rules:
- Write three lines inspired by the photo prompt.
- Link back to this post.
- Tag your post with 3LineTales (so we can find you in the Reader).
- Read and comment on other TLT participants’ lines.
- Have fun.
Ouuu, I don’t like the “fix me” part in this relationship. Great 3 line tale!
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Oh. Why you don’t like the fix me part??
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Sounds like he is trying to “fix” her. Maybe I misunderstood??
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Nope. You can actually interlret it negatively or positively. 🙂
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wow, I’m with Priceless Joy on this one. No woman needs to be fixed. We are perfect as we are. After all, God made a rough draft (man) before he made woman 🙂
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What if it’s a guy asking a gal to fix him?
I love it, Rosema – great take on the photo 🙂
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That’s okay though what woman wants a fixer-upper? Been there. Done that. It ended badly. Never again.
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OH. Got it, Mel. Though I must say I am a man fixer at the moment.
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Yay! Your comment reminds me of the song ‘Better Man’ by Lady Antebellum. I think I am in that situation, not so worst, but I am a fixer. It’s hard actually. To fix a man. 😀
Thank you, Sonya!
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Love your three line tale! Great job 🙂
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Thank you, Kay! Your words are like sunlights that brighten me up!
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My pleasure! You are an AMAZING talent, and I look forward to reading your posts 😀
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That is so sweet of you to say!!!! ❤
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☺
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❤
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Oh wowza, this is good!
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Thank you, Azul! Your poems are equally good. 🙂
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Thank you (blushing) 🙂
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It’s true. 😀
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You’re Very Sweet!
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❤
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Ooh this is a great poem! Interesting flow and rhyme scheme. And fantastic take on the photo.
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Yay! Glad to see you back, Jade! 🙂 I missed your comprehensive feedback! 🙂 Thank you!
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Thank you! Glad to be back, Rosema. Looking forward to catching up on everything I’ve missed on your blog 🙂
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Yay! Looking forward to reading your encouraging posts and lovely well-written tales, too, Jade!
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[…] Piece by Piece […]
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Thank you for the pingback, Sonya!
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