The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu*
*A senryu-series collaboration with Melinda Kucsera of In Media Res.
Melinda, an eloquent poetess and a gifted fantasy writer, is the author of epic fantasy adventure Stars and Angel Sing. Visit her blog and take a thrilling journey as she takes you to the enchanted world of Shayari.
Lust
Hands slide down and graze–
erogenous zone ahead–
panties tossed away.
Will you stop or not?
Against her will you should stop,
for your soul’s sake, stop.
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Photo credit: Melinda Kucsera
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More deadly senryu tomorrow…
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Great job, you two. Now let’s kick some ass
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Yeaaaaah! Got to finish some reports first. -_____-
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You’ll knock ’em out 🙂
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Haha! Thank you for the vote of confidence, Mel! 😀
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Phew! Very impact full! !
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Oh! Thank you, Jacq!:)
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Yes thank you! We enjoyed working on these 🙂
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Very well done 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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Thank you, Jacq! 😀
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I agree! 😀
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My oh my! You said a lot with few words!
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Oh thank you, Belinda! This is a product of Mel and I’s teamwork. 😀
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We make a great team eh? 😉
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Thank you! 🙂
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Indeed Mel! 😀 *high five*
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This sounds like on the borderline of rape. Great poem!
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oh no– I don’t think we meant for that to happen!
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Oh, I thought maybe it was intentional. Sorry!!
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That’s ok. It’s supposed to be the dialogue inside your head when you’re trying not to give in 😉 The voice of conscience 🙂
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There was just a few words in the poem that made me think that about rape – not the entire poem.
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It’s okay dear. I get your point and it is somehow my thinking too. 😀
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I’m glad to hear it isn’t just me! LOL!
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Haha! Yes, of course! 😀 😀 😀
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😀 😀 😀 Hahahahahaha!
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Yeahhhh! Right, Mel! 😀
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Hmmmm… I think it is somehow what’s on my mind, too?
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Was it?
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Slightly. Hehe.
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I said it on Melinda’s post and I’ll say it here: Sexay. And the word: Kilig. 😀
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Haha! Thank you beautiful Annie. This piece can really be interpreted in so many ways…. it can be dark or sweet or frightening.
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Indeed, my sweet Rosema 🙂
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😘😘😘
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Frightening.
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Oh thank you, Christopher! 😀
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You are the dynamic duo of collaborations. Lovely, ladies!!
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Sorry for the late reply dear Carol! Thank you sooo much!
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You’re very welcome!
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Lovely Senryu. Sexy, a mystery at the end? Does she want him to stop?
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I think so.. it’s a battle in the mind. Battle against lust.
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Well done collaboration!!
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Thank you, Azul! 😀
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Most welcome 🙂
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