“I love you.”
You whispered softly.
I looked up,
and
looked through
the lies
your windows
cannot hide.
—
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Photo credit: Len dela Cruz
In response to Daily Post: Window
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Great work!
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Wow! You really read my posts. 🙂 Thank youuu!
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Haha, I love your work! Brilliant!
You’re welcome! ❤
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Oh thank you so much! That is is kind of you! 😀
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🙂
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BEAUTIFUL
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Thank you, Naren! Isn’t it painful, though?
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you for reading and for your comment, Nadine! ❤
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Lovely and honest take on the prompt. From the post I’ve read, I feel you are too good with writing to the point with a powerful impact!
Have a great day!
Arcane owl
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Oh. Your words just melt my heart. Thank you my friend! 🙂
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Pleasure is mine 🙂
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Magnificent
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Thank you, Nandita! ❤
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You are most welcome. 🙂
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Awesome pic. Simple but a unique view. Poem is coming from the heart.
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Hi Vinneve! Thank you for reading and for sharing your kind thoughts. 🙂 Yes. This is really from the heart, though it is fictional. 🙂
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deep Rosema–your poem digs so deep with so few words.
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Those are weighty words coming from you dear Mel. ❤
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you deserve every one 🙂
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Awww.
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This is wonderful, Rosema!
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and painful? 🙂 Thank you dear PJ! ❤
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beautiful
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Thank you, dear!
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Ugh. That was deep, it pierced right through my core. Outstanding!
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Oh thank you, Annie. Sometimes the windows of our souls cannot really lie, right?
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That’s right, they can’t. You’re welcome, my dear friend 🙂
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True! Thank you dear Annie!
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Always! ❤️
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Intriguing title. Sad verse. The narrator has the perception to see what’s through the windows. A strongly-crafted cautionary telling.
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Thank you, Christopher! His eyes (windows of his soul) were not able to hide the lie of love he just uttered.
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Wowza, this is Wonderfully penned!! Oh that my eyes could see the lies more clearly….
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Yeah… His eyes (window to his soul) cannot really lie… unlike his lips.
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True…
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Yeah! 😀
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Wow…..I am speechless. So much emotion in so few words.
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Oh thank you Kay! I actually write more of short poems than long ones. Maybe I am lazy? HAHA
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Not lazy at all! The ability to convey so much emotion in so few words is BRILLIANT!
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Oh Kay! You are now melting my heart! ❤ ❤ ❤
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