Words’ Witness

Posted on March 16, 2016March 16, 2016 by areadingwriter

Your blankness
entices
my mind’s
juices.

Your whiteness,
induces
my fingers’
rushed ignites.

Yes,
you are
my soul’s
respite.

—

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In response to Discover Challenges: Witness

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21 thoughts on “Words’ Witness”

Sonya March 16, 20167:32 pm Reply

Ooooh, notebook love 💕 – beautiful, Rosema 🙂

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1. rosemawrites March 17, 20169:27 am Reply
  
  Yes, Sonya! Notebook — blank page love. 😀 😀 😀 Thank you so much!
  
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Azul Zaffre March 17, 20161:16 am Reply

There’s nothing like a lovely blank page, just waiting for words–is there? 🙂

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1. rosemawrites March 17, 20169:24 am Reply
  
  Yeah! There’s NOTHING! 😀 😀 😀 It’s like a strong magnetic force that pulls you closer…
  
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  1. Azul Zaffre March 17, 201611:02 am
    
    And your fingers start to itch!
    
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  2. rosemawrites March 17, 201611:27 am
    
    That is trueee! And your mind can’t silence the thoughts.. words…
    
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  3. Azul Zaffre March 18, 20161:25 am
    
    Absolutely! The words get loud!
    
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  4. rosemawrites March 18, 201612:16 pm
    
    Yeah! They will scream until you follow them and let them out!
    
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  5. Azul Zaffre March 19, 201612:37 pm
    
    Hahaha–yes!
    
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  6. rosemawrites March 20, 20166:16 pm
    
    Yeah! 😀
    
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  7. Azul Zaffre March 21, 20163:00 am
    
    🙂
    
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  8. rosemawrites March 21, 20161:05 pm
    
    ❤
    
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clcouch123 March 17, 20161:35 am Reply

The blank, lined, page and pen invite. Why? I think you’ve covered it. In addition to the rhyme, i and s sounds interlock the words thus tightening the message of enticement. Writers, unite. Thanks, Rosema.

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1. rosemawrites March 17, 20169:26 am Reply
  
  Ohhh! YOu really noticed things I never even know I have written! You have clear and precise reader eyes, Christopher!
  
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mandibelle16 March 17, 20169:00 am Reply

Lovely, you found your respite 🙂

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1. rosemawrites March 17, 201611:17 am Reply
  
  Yes. A blank page is always a respite. 😀
  
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Heena Rathore P. March 17, 20162:24 pm Reply

Another beautiful poem. Love it , dear 🙂

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1. rosemawrites March 18, 201611:21 am Reply
  
  Yay!
  Thank you so much for reading, Heena! I appreciate it! ❤
  
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  1. Heena Rathore P. March 18, 20163:32 pm
    
    Thank YOU for writing so beautifully dear 🙂
    
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  2. rosemawrites March 18, 20166:11 pm
    
    I should be saying that to you, too! 😀
    
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  3. Heena Rathore P. March 25, 20161:48 am
    
    There it is again… The proof of your sweetness 😊
    
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