Gone*
*An ‘on-the-spot’ collaboration with Manan of Manan Unleashed.
Manan is the beautiful woman who scribbles thought-provoking, sometimes vicious, sometimes sweet and always great poetries. Visit her blog and let her words break or touch your fragile heart.
Dreams are the reflections of our desires
Someone told me a long time ago.
I’ve been dreaming of losing you
Makes me wonder if it’s true.
No re-spite for nightmares
while I fight sleep, and
when a-wake, I
find you are
tru-ly
gone.
Here
I smell
the remains
of your musky
lingering sweet scent,
my skin still feels the ghost
…of your masculine… gentle
fingers, caressing and wrapping
me wholly, beneath the soft white sheets.
Now my room’s a haunted house with you gone.
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Photo credit: Krista Mangulsone
Thank you for the open invitation, Manan! It is an honor that I can finally say I have a collab piece with you, goddess of poems! ❤
This is a beautiful spur-of-the-moment collab, Rosema. Your reverse etheree fits so very well with Manan’s work. Bravo!
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Oh thank you so much, Thomas! I was actually talking intensely with my boss when I wrote that etheree. (I hope she didn’t notice. HAHA)
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🙂 ah, you are such a wonderful multitasker, Rosema 🙂
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Hahaha! Thank you. It seems my boss didn’t notice. I can’t stop my brain from writing this poem. And voila!
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That’s awesome! You are welcome 🙂
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🙂 🙂 ❤
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Rosema, I’m just so touched and humbled by your words for me. Thank you so much.
Goddess of poems..lol
And your response is just outstanding. Thank you so much. We must work together more often. I’ll put it up soon on my blog too.
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Hi Manan! 🙂 Those are just the least I can say about you. YOU are the goddess of poems! 😀 😀 😀
And, thank you! Really. It is my honor. I am kinda afraid to ask you for a collab because you’re so good. That’s why I really tried not to miss you open invitation. 😀
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You are awesome. And so silly too 🙂 that you find me intimidating. I’m as open as an exposed soul can be to ppl who make me feel at ease about my nudity. You have become one of them, really. Anytime you feel like a collab, just let me know. I’d be more than happy to work with you. Okay? 🙂
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Yay! Thank you! That just made me sooo excited. I am always intimidated by great poets, that’s how I felt about Mel, too. 😀 You two are both great! ❤
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And she says we are stars in her sky..:):)
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That’s so sweet! 😀
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This is really fabulous Rosema, both the wordings and the form. Well done 🙂
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Thank you, Jacq! My etheree is just the beautiful effect of Manan’s. 🙂
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Beautiful! Did you write this or did Manan write this?
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Hi PJ! 🙂 Manan wrote the first part. She gave an open invitation to anyone to make a complementary etheree… and I did. 🙂
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It turned out wonderful!!
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Wow! Wonderfully done! Who wrote which part? 😁
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Thank you, dear Fun! 😀 😀 😀
Manan wrote the first part. The second’s my response to her beautiful work. 😀
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Both parts blend so perfectly. No one would know that they were written by two poets! 😄
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Awww! That’s so sweet of you, dear Fun! ❤
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Reblogged this on Manan Unleashed and commented:
On the spot magic!! Manan and Rosema
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Yay! Thank you, Manan! Yeah. Writing with you is indeed magical!
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Lets conjure some more of it then :). Maybe ask the Queen of Fantasy to bless us with a tri-collab? 🙂
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WOAH! That would be AWESOME! 😀 😀 😀 #GirlPower!
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Melinda, are you listening? APPEAR NOW! 😉 Accio Melinda! :):)
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Haha! 😀 She’s currently in slumber, Manan.
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Whenever the sun kisses her lids…:)
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Yes. I bet she’ll be excited too! 😀
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I’m in. A tri-collab would be awesome!
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There you goooo! 😀 😀 😀
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😀 When do we start and will we conduct this through Google docs?
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We are both present in Googlr Docs but I am not sure yet about Manan..
Hey Manan!:)
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Hi Rosema, sorry I missed you guys. I was doing off line stuff like working, cooking and visiting family. But I do want to do this tri collab. Let’s try an rendezvous again
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Haha! I actually missed it! XD Can we try again? HAHA
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you missed me getting everything confused that’s all you missed! 🙂
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HahHaha. It’s okay!:)
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😀 Next time
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bravo ladies! What a fantastic collaboration and on the spot too!
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Yay! Thank you, Mel! An accidental collab I must say. 🙂
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It’s a happy accident then!
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Indeed! Have you read our convo – me and Manan’s, about you?
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I just did 🙂 I’d love a tri-collab! 🙂
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yay! I’m so excited for this! 😀
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What’s our theme/form?
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Let’s wait for Manan? 🙂
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Sure
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I was late. -_- HAHA
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nah you’re just right
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Haha. Thank you!!!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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you’re welcome 🙂
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The white bed sheet in the picture reminded me to change my bed with all white from bed sheet to pillow cases. Plus, the way you guys wrote this piece is incredible. =) Cheers to your future collaborations!!!
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Haha! Now I am reminded to do that, too, Diane! (Though that would be super dirt-friendly? :D)
Thank you!
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Dirt-friendly to remind us to change it all the time. Heheheh ^__^
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So true!!! 😀
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What a beautiful collaboration!
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Thank you, Mandi! Manan’s a great poetess. 😀
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Oh Wow Wow Wow!!
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That’s too much, Azul! 😀 😀 😀
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No, seriously it was exquisite!
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Okay. I believe in you, Azul. 😍
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Good 🙂
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Well written and it has a great graphic display with the increasing and reducing word numbers. Brilliant!!
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Thank you, Sam!:) your words make my heart melt. ❤
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