You were once
my
morning
light.
Now I’m left
with
cold dark
nights.
—
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Mario Calvo
In response to Daily Post:Fleeting.
I write because I read. I read because I write.
You were once
my
morning
light.
Now I’m left
with
cold dark
nights.
—
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Mario Calvo
In response to Daily Post:Fleeting.
The play of words here is pretty fantastic
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Oh thank you, Manan! 😀
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You are welcome. It was a joy to read
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Thanks, again! 😀
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I love this poem, Rosema! Very beautiful, very spare in tone, and yet so eloquent!
I see your writing is flowering these days — your poem and stories are becoming more full, more realized. Nice going!
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Oh thank you, Vijaya! ^_^
I guess because I am really stressed this past few days and writing felt like a breath of fresh air, especially poetry.
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Lovely!
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Thank you! 😀
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You’re welcome!
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So beautiful!
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Thank you! 😀
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simple word , very beautiful
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Yay! Thank you, Naren!
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Excellent!
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Thank you, Azul! ❤
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Most welcome 🙂
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YAY! 😀
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Another lovely post from you. Ooohhhh… ❤
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Yay! Thank you, Maria! ❤
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You’re most welcome~ ^.^
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Love the metaphor and can totally relate to this. Beautifully sad, my friend. Hugs to you!
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So I am revisiting my posts to check if I miss some comments and voila! WordPress! Why did I miss this! -___-
Nonetheless, thank you so much! ❤ You are still the king of metaphors, for me! 😀
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You are welcome, my friend. it happens!
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Oh. There. I didn’t call you Christopher this time, right?? I am sorrrrry…
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Haha, no, you didn’t 🙂 No worries!!
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Finally. Haha. Thank you!!!
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Simply lovely. Hmm!
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and sad? Thank you, Jacq! 😀
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You are welcome. Not sure that I remembered to let you know, so just in case I forgot, let me also use this opportunity to extend an invitation to a bloggers brunch party taking place on my blog on this weekend Sat-Sunday. The post is titled it’s a brunch party. I believe that it will be fun
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Yes you did. Thank you, Jacq! I will try to go. The internet connection here is not amiable. 😢😢😢
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I can quite imagine how irritating that can get. Looking forward to having you for a wee bit 🙂
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Yeah. It is. -____-
Was never able to go. I’m so sorry dear.
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Not a problem 🙂
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Thank you!
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Very sad, but beautifully written!
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I agree, PJ. I can still feel the hurt when I read this poem. Thank youuu! 😀 (fictional hurt. :D)
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My pleasure!! ((Hugs!!))
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❤❤❤😘😘😘
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The poem is right on target for the challenge. The photo goes perfectly with it.
Nicely done ….
Isadora 😎
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Hi there! 😀 Thank you for your insightful thoughts, Isadora!
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aw this is so sad 😦 But that is reality for the single among us (me) 🙂
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Awww. That will change, someday. ❤
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Yes it will, someday ❤ 🙂
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True! 😀
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Song lyrics, Rosema. Lilting song lyrics.
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Wow. Lilting. 🙂 (had to google the meaning. 😀 😀 😀 )
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