Five decades after the war, I am now here to do your final request.
It was never your intention to release those bombs. Chief said no one will be killed. But a week after you did your first mission, you read more than a thousand lives were shattered.
It haunted you.
Just five months after you quit, you bombed your own brains.
On your behalf, I ask for forgiveness to the souls you killed. I hope you are now forgiven, dear.
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It was a normal day when the big black balls came. Kaboom here, kaboom there. Blood here, cadavers there.
It signalled the start of the second world war.
Looking at these canyons responsible for my husband’s death, I searched for anger. Anger for the soldier who launched the bombs.
But after fifty years, I found none.
Whoever soldier killed my love and a thousand more lives, you are forgiven.
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Word count: 150
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Sunday Photo Fiction
In response to Sunday Photo Fiction for February 28, 2016.
Sunday Photo Fiction is a weekly writing challenge hosted by Alastair Forbes where a photo is used as a prompt for a piece of fiction using around 200 words. The piece doesn’t have to center around exactly what the photo is, it can be just used as a basis for a story.
A story well penned. The war had left behind many sad stories to tell. 🙂
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Oh that was fast my dear, Fun! ❤ ❤ ❤
That is true. Been reading a lot of historical fictions set in wars and yeah… it's saddening.
Wishing you a great week, dear Funsie! ❤
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This is another busy week. 🙂 You have a great week too! 😉
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I agree… I got a loooong Monday to go.
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Here’s some coffee to charge us up! 😀
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Thank you! Fighting! 💪🏻😄
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AJA! 😀 😀 😀
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The damages of war are innumerable, but those hurt by it should never hold on to the pain. It’s far more debilitating.
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Yes. The guilt more than thr hurt is far more devastating. Because it rits you inside.
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Wars are devastating, for the men and women that fight in them to the families that are affected. This is a great story because it is about “forgiveness.” Great story, Rosema!
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Thank you, PJ! I once thought the victims of wars are those who are killed. But after reading books about wars, I learned wars also destroy those who survived.
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Yes, you’re right, Rosema.
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Thanks again, PJ! ❤
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powerful write Rosema, wars destroy every life they encounter, no matter which side of the gun you’re on.
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That is true. I once thought the victims are those who died, but I realized that those who survive are also left shattered.
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Yes they are. War is an awful thing
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It is. Truly it is.
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Forgiveness is one of Life’s hardest things and I’m glad the narrator was able to forgive. When it comes to war, it’s always good to remember that soldiers are merely following orders. If we are to place blame, I think we should place it on society as a whole that creates the need for war when there really should never be one. Ah, but I digress lol.
I loved this piece, Rosema. Short, but poignant in every word. You’ve managed to say so much in so little and draw forth lots of emotions. Fantastic job!
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Oh wow, Jade. Your comments are more than insightful. And your points are well made.
Yes, soldiers who survived wars are not actually triumphant after they killed a lot of lives. I figured that out after reading a lot of books about war. And yeah… a society that creates war should be blamed.
Thank you so much, Jade!
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An amazing look at war. From perspectives that deserve the first consideration.
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Thank you, Christopher. 🙂 Yes. These two wives and their husbands are both victims of war.
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Yes. And in understanding war, more so negotiating it, their experiences and views should be prime. Thank you, Rosema, for having created all this, all these.
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That is true. I agree with you. 🙂
Thank you, Christopher! Your thoughts are always insightful. I treasure them.
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Intriguing and sad…war 😦
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That is so true, Mandi.
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I’m… I’m at loss of words to describe it. War and death always makes us feel depressed. It’s endless. *sigh*
It’s a poignantly written story, Rosema. I love how you twist it with a resolution at the end. Well done!
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Oh.. thank you, Maria. I think wars do have that effect on us. Because it destroys not just infrastructures. It destroys lives.
I appreciate your words, dear Maria!
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I totally agree with you… Hmp. The best way is to look on the brighter side of everything… 🙂
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I agree! Let’s just be thankful that we lived on a rather peaceful era. Let’s hope our world will remain peaceful. 🙂
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AMEN to that. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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😀 😀 😀
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Maria!!!
Is this the one you are talking about last time: http://www.nationalbookstore.com/habang-wala-pa-sila.html?
😀 😀 😀
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Oh my… oh my… oh my!!!!! Yes! This is it! I’ve been checking NBS website since Juan Miguel announced but it’s always unavailable. Did they just post it today? I hope it’s already here in Cebu. 😀 Thanks a lot for the info Rosema!
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Yes. I just saw it in my Facebook newsfeed! 😀 😀 😀
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Haha! Will be checking out NBS here this weekend then. 😀
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Wow. Alert! 😀
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For the love of #hugot! 😀
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Truth! 😀
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😀 😀 😀
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Very nice 😊 (sorry if it seems like I’m stalking you atm lol). I’m feeding a hungry baby and your posts are providing a much needed breather, you are very talented!
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Oh Sam! That’s so sweet of you. No worries. 🙂 Apologies aren’t needed. 🙂 I love reading your thoughts. 🙂
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Yes, war takes lives and plagues those who have lost loved ones, forever. So true, Rosema.
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Oh. You said a sad reality beautifully. Thank you, my friend! ❤
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You are welcome, my friend.
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Have a great night, my friend! ❤❤❤
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It was a busy but great night. Thank you. Hope your day is going well 🙂 ❤
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Mine’s been busy. A lotbof writing going on. -_-
Have a great day!
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That’s great to hear 🙂 I will, thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome! 😉
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