Elemental Senryu*
*A collaboration with Melinda Kucsera of In Media Res.
Melinda, an eloquent poetess and a gifted fantasy writer, is the author of epic fantasy adventure Stars and Angel Sing. Visit her blog and take a thrilling journey as she takes you to the enchanted world of Shayari.
Water
Evolves ceaselessly,
frozen then flowing briskly,
can’t live without thee.
Water dashes rocks,
falling in a silver spray–
purity that flows.
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To be continued tomorrow…
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Photo credit: Unsplash.com
A Reading Writer 
Oh so its a series on the five elements. How wonderful, you two!
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Is it five??? Haha. We have written four only. Earth, Water, wind (air) and fire. 😂
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should we write a fifth? What is the fifth element anyway?
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I am not actually sure, Mel… Is it… Metal?
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I don’t know. Metal is in the earth so I’m thinking that isn’t it
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Dajena said it’s only four. 🙂
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Yay! That’s what I thought. The 5th element was a movie and not a great one at that. 🙂
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Oohhh. I haven’t seen it yet.
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It’s an older movie with Bruce Willis. It was ok, not as good as it could have been.
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And it is a sci-fi?
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haha I loved this!!
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Yay! Thank you, Ishma! ❤❤❤
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hehe anytime sweety!! 😀 you are the Miss Amazing! 😉
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That is you, too!
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Awwwwww
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Another beautiful piece! I can’t wait to read the rest of the element, Rosema. 😀
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Thank you, Maria! Writing with Mel is fun and inspiring. Her great poetic skills is contagious. 🙂
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The pleasure is always mine. Glad to see you’re enjoying it, Rosema. 😀
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Thank you, Mel! I hope you are having a great weekend. ❤❤❤
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Ha! CAUGHT! You’re most welcome, Rosema. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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AGAIN! -______-
Sorry dear!
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No worries! Haha. I get that a lot (of course not). 😉
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HAHA. It’s just me.. there is something between you and Mel. It’s because of the M! (palusot! :D)
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HAHA! That’s what I’m thinking. It must be because of the “M” thingy. XD
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HAHA. Please forgive me! 😀 😀 😀
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HAHA! You’re forgiven. :3
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Forever moving. Restless
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You got it right, Jacq!
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Beautiful write on the four elements. 🙂 You both rock! 🙂
p.s. there is no 5th, that is just a film 😉
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*smiling sigh*
Yay! Thank you for your kind words Dajena! I only know four. What is the fifth in the film?
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Aha, you should watch the film then 😀 hehehe!
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Haha. No spoiler from you? 😂😂😂
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A great collab…though your voices are distinct (Rosema’s the first and Melinda’s the second – if I read correctly) they fit together well.
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You are RIGHT!!! How’d you figure that out? 😱😱😱
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I am an observant reader, my friend. :):)
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Oohhh. So how do I write. 😀 I have read a story about email-pals who do not know the identity of the each other. But the other one was able to figure out who is his email-pal because he said ‘you writer just like you talk’. So… yeah… I am curious. How do I write? 😀
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It mostly has to do with your word choice and how you phrase your words. You and Melinda have different writing styles. And, because I have read so much of both your work, I can tell which is which.
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Oh… Thank you! I appreciate your thoughts a lot! 🙂
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YOu are welcome 🙂
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Have you seen my mention of you, Thomas?
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Hmm, your mention of me? Where?
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In my coffee-post. 🙂
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I read it and am on the way back now to catch up 🙂 Thank you!!!
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Oh yeah.. I noticed and I am more than touched. ❤
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🙂
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😉
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Beautiful collaboration again in these verses. Love how the descriptions of nature mix with thosefeeling the speaker is experiencing.
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Oh thank you for your insightful words, Mandi! 😀 😀 😀
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You are welcome 🙂
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