Elemental Senryu*

Elemental Senryu*

*A collaboration with Melinda Kucsera of In Media Res.

Melinda, an eloquent poetess and a gifted fantasy writer, is the author of epic fantasy adventure Stars and Angel Sing. Visit her blog and take a thrilling journey as she takes you to the enchanted world of Shayari.


Water

Evolves ceaselessly,
frozen then flowing briskly,
can’t live without thee.

Water dashes rocks,
falling in a silver spray–
purity that flows.

To be continued tomorrow…

Photo credit: Unsplash.com

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54 thoughts on “Elemental Senryu*

  1. A great collab…though your voices are distinct (Rosema’s the first and Melinda’s the second – if I read correctly) they fit together well.

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      1. Oohhh. So how do I write. 😀 I have read a story about email-pals who do not know the identity of the each other. But the other one was able to figure out who is his email-pal because he said ‘you writer just like you talk’. So… yeah… I am curious. How do I write? 😀

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      2. It mostly has to do with your word choice and how you phrase your words. You and Melinda have different writing styles. And, because I have read so much of both your work, I can tell which is which.

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